I like them both. I hesitate to give unrequested criticism but one rule I always try to follow is not to hide letters with other letters. Your E and your N are getting lost. Stucture is dope. If you just overlap parts of the E like it is snaking over and under bars of the K and maybe have a few dots insinuating where the lines are at. But that's it. No hate and definitely respect in every other way.
No doubt, this little book is killing me...keep running out of room and have to cram everything on the page. even with 4 letters its hard to make shit fit. Gonna go cop a new book today...but word up I appreciate the love
do some more benching and studying, and keep on trying new shit...letter structure doesnt come overnight. you gotta earn that shit. My reccommendation is to not ask for help cause graffiti aint something anyone can hold your hand through or let you ride the wave while they earn style. If you really wanna write, then everything will happen the way its supposed to. just keep at it every day and youll figure some shit out. not being a hater. we were all toys at one point in time
blasting toys over the internet doesnt give you street cred either... ...just saying. you're wasting energy