jast, that's awesome for only writing for a year. Keep it up, looks like a nice chill little spot to practise. You seem to have good can control, just keep improving on your letters. my stuff from the last couple days [Broken External Image]:http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/6597/img0072dg7.jpg Shot with Canon PowerShot A410 at 2007-06-25 [Broken External Image]:http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5858/img0030ij0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7631/copy1ofimg0012rj4.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1182843564_f.jpg And I know about the highlights... jackJill, i like both of your pieces... Is the character yours too?
wing- i like most of your stuff but i for some reason i just dont liek this one. i think it could have done without the red things in the fill.
Well, I kinda tought that the piece is too empty spaced, so I put that cause it was the only colour I had...
wing - i dont like this one jackjill - thats a sick ass character props for this one aefx - Practice simples View attachment 285555 View attachment 285556
hester touch my kester mester that bomb is sik and i love that character jackjill. heres one of my bombs any crits[Broken External Image]:http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4097/cinbombuo1.th.jpg
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Hey, i write MaNtS, im from Australia and ive been writing for around a year, joined up a while ago, but i had been peeping the forums for a while before that. anyway here is some of my stuff, crits are welcome,peace. Start off wiith some stuff i did a while ago right up to one i did last weekend. View attachment 285785 View attachment 285786 View attachment 285787 View attachment 285788 View attachment 285789 View attachment 285790 View attachment 285791 View attachment 285792 View attachment 285793 View attachment 285794 View attachment 285795 I got arrested a couple months back,parents flipped,so i constructed a 2 by 6 metre wall in my backyard to paint and improve,then hit the scene again in a couple months with a new tag,when shits setted down. Anyway i painted one on saturday, and i came out to get flicks on sunday and it had poured saturday night and cracked the paint etc, here is the end result View attachment 285796 And an inventory flick to finish things off. View attachment 285797 Peace, stay up.
1st thing, you come here and want crits , and you didnt even give crits 1st 2nd thing, the inventory is in the wrong thread. give crits before asking for some
Mants....good good good trachside hits....keep up teh cleaness aswell....also...MAYBE work a tad on your lettering...anyways and Chalk.....Sabotaz is extremely high pressure and is extremely toxic ... apprentley...sum bloke did the legal wall...all with sabotaz....and he couldnt stand near thewall to flick it was that bad of smell...aha..so if your gonna use it..i suggest use a resp...iv seen it in action...and it is very high pressure
my throw i painted for the first time.. [Broken External Image]:http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/19966/2004072491183116689_rs.jpg crits..
work on the outlines, fills and try and keep your letter somewhat less droopy. Other than that great first attempt.
overall i think its okay. its not amazing but its not horrible. you did pretty good on that outline. maybe use something besides green next time not really feeling the color of the forcefield. work on your u i think it could be mistaken for a v but maybe its just me. your s is just kinda well blah. i dont really like the s kinda ruins the flow you got going so far. the k i really like just clean it up a bit. just keep up and practice. and next time you want critz. give some other people some first. thanks.
just a few quickies i had a couple half cans to get rid of ... THANX FOR ALL THE POSITIVE FEEDBACK GUYS makes me feel like not such a big waste....Jast