deff lose the arrow. for now though keep all your bars to form your letters the same size. lose the little nub things on the end of the letters. scooot your o in closer to the n and lean it more to the left. what I circled in the red lose. the green is an example of what i mean keep all your bars the same width.
My friend wants me to post this for crits. [Broken External Image]:http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c338/canuckboy321/dram.jpg
aka I drew this but dont want to admit to my toyness. It's ok, go to the new to graff thread and drop the arrows. tez - the second one is hot, I like it's flow and that character is pretty cool too. Keep working with fun stuff like that slime, with basic pieces like that, it's what gives it some life and individuality. [Broken External Image]:http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/419/009zz7.jpg some nonsense and a ridiculous A
Sou - looks sick. Teze - your style is no nice and clean. Did a not so good looking sketch but may aswell post it. [Broken External Image]:http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/8125/eurotingfh1.jpg Crits?
Reps - whole thing starts off kinda chunkier and good but it looses a bit mid M and A by going too thin imo. Hoostein - he/she needs to ditch the arrows and get some structure down more before trying extensions too much. go with much simpler basic letters and work with getting thickness even etc. use bars. Asma - top buster on left looks allright. Last A on the handstyle looks good aswell. You loose the 3d in the bottom left one by trying to cross over sections and lines that are too thin. Sezer - the first one looks good but the E's could suit the other letters better imo. the E's in the the second one though are decent, you should tilt them more to the right and flow them out more. dodgy examp.. [Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p11587801.jpg hoodrich - your handstyles rippen. The W on the sketch though should be wide to suit the style of the S rather then leaning over imo. Structured to match your W handstyle shape if that makes sense. sevewon - i'd try and work on letter thinkness/bars before trying to add too much style to them like you have on the S. canvas and not finished but I'm pic deficient.. [Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p11587598.jpg
jesus its been a long time since i have been here so i have been working on my euro style and this is my first real attempt, looks better on paper but scanner acting screwy so here it is through vandal lol [Broken External Image]:http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/6771/untitledko3.png Shot at 2007-08-16
inkbits-- that canvas lookin ill as hell.. you should add sometotem poles or something to add to that border if you know what i am talking a bout. SOu-- the bottom one that looks like metal supporters for buildings is pretty cool work with that. sezer-- the black and white ones with the green are cool .. i really like the character though. scare= thoose simples are way coool
new one done with sharpies :/ [Broken External Image]:http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b152/F-Flat/quickie-4.jpg
who cares if theyre just sharpies?? i use sharpie most of the times... neuro your r an e look funny man.. iono... heres a sketch i did in a homies book yesterday... looks pretty gay..
Heeeey Baze, want to exchange sometime? Been digging your shit for a while View attachment 296376 Unfinished, by far... My first canvas..
Bump for critz please BouncingSoul: Dud i liked your old stuff better way to much going on in your piece, take it down a bit make the letters maybe a little thicker and less bouncy Glass: Sorry man not feelin it i guess its not to my liking i say scrap it and try again Fube: Love it dont like the top extension on the E
Bouncingsoul-sick can't wait to see it finished! Bazer-lookin good.The only thing thats killing me is the extension on the top of the E.It's wobbly. Code-I'm feeling the R and the N and the last letter but I can't tell what it is.The O is a bit boring compared to the other letters. New throwie: View attachment 296412 Does the D look a bit too much like a B?
shut the fuck up do you live in europe? drak get urs letters the same size. neukr, work on consistancy
neuker i will give you a crit since your new, but next time crit the peoples work above you, like mine for instince neuker: Your letters have no flow they just have random chops you need to find when to use those bumps, also your letters just overall need work.
bumps for my man . . not feelin the candle thoo but it aint finished yet an exchange with WERS, feel like im fuckin it up so i decided to take a pic now before more damage is done . . . think i will have to add alot of black with the 3d and outline . . . just dont know [Broken External Image]:http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/9246/1282809kn6.jpg
sky5! last time i heard from u u were sitting in a 3rd world country crack whore house with maggots crawling on the screen or some crazy shit. howve u been? the piece is dope, but u kind of sank after the WE. always dope as fuck tho.