braxton- keep workin on it, dont be so generic. everyone else is lookin sick, that abstract shit is nice. dawsek im startin to think u actually did straight up bite bastardo [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSketch5.jpg just some shit i did. i still got writers block. crits?
yeah i kinda figured that but how bout u crit me then agree? not trynna sound like an asshole but yeah it makes sense
theres nothing to crit every sketch i see from you is the same. maybe some extra addons but theyre all still like exactly the same.
Morne, are you good at drawing normal shit? Just wondering. My advice is use bars, but don't do what you are doing. Do not make them the same exact size by drawing two horizontal lines with a ruler. Just do quick pencil sketches while using bars with a little funk/flare etc. No need to even outline at this point.
Drivers ed sucks. View attachment 302853 shitty 3d i know. Fucking hate u's and having a hardtime with my q. Fucking bad name I know.
looks like zvake try and proportion all your letters to be within the same size area as each other. with your z and u try and follow the structure of the letter on the keyboard, but just distorted your way if that makes sesnse. Like the round part of the q at the bottom needs to be thicker and your u deeds a descender on the right side [Broken External Image]:http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/1264/004kf7.jpg for and exchange with mers
condoms without sex- I really like it paste- only letter I'm really feeling is the a, sorry man. actually the k is pretty good too
neukr, nice throws I like em.what is your second letter tho? it just looks like a blob in every throw. View attachment 302866 something new.
Naysayer- Like the a, the r is alright. Reddrum- Its not really my style, I'd work on the letters before the fill, but whatever I know its fun to do. Neukr- Throwies arent bad, cant really see that bars piece, but from what I make out, it looks alright. Thanks everybody for the feedback.
no dont do that man. look. youre doing block ltters. thats cool, but you needa learn how to add some style. theres different kinds of bars. some are loose and shit, and some are solid and straight. not solid and straight like yours but solid and straight like mine.(the 2nd one) the first style the bars are loose, knahwmsayin? they dont stay the same thickness but they look alright. its because im picking one way to keep them which is big to small, or small to big, and theyre not solid, they curve. the only pointed edges could be the ends. View attachment 302880 now this second style of bars, they stay the same thickness just like yours but the ends dont make the bar look like rectangles, it just adds on some more style right there. ok you see how some of the ends are like "/\" and the bar you make after it, you choose the thickness by one of the points. sane for the first style. im just tryn to get you out of using block letters man cuz they dont looks fun. i dont know if i said it before but theres tons of br styles. just get a little loose man. View attachment 302881
fuck this shit i cant do it. its fuckin impossible for me to do new shit. [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneBullshit.jpg probably the last yur gonna see of me in here for awhile, unless i come up with some shit in my sleep. doubt it tho. crits?
o hey morne. im just gonna say what i do when im really stuck with a style and its time for change but i cant. i basically stop doing anything related to the letters i used to be doing. like making the tops all the same in the bottom one here. or i go back to an old style. or i just sort of dooodle or go simpler and evolve from there. or i just make a point of not doing any of the same letters or doing all my letters with different structure. and i hate to say it but sometimes i bite other dudes for like three pieces and then come back to my shit and ill have fresh ideas on how to do it. but dont bite like a duche. and change is good its what progresses ur graff. if i were to try and change that style. i would stay simple. like dont do the wierd connections blocks or extensions just the bars. and id not draw guide lines to keep the letters same size and if u dont. then just make ur letters not exactly same hight and shit. and dont make ur O out of 4 bars (like maybe two curved ones or three or something to change the shape.) and change thicknesses a little and stuff basically. fuck with it until it looks really shitty and u hate it... then go from there. but that shit dont happen overnight. just keep working through the rough patche.s baze really good crit. morne you should listen to him because no offense that styles progressin like a dead sheep. takes time tho to get to that level. and baze damn id like to see a piece in that first style aha. naysayer check out bazes crit. i think whats happening to it is your trying to add style but ur bars arent flowin. keep working around and listen to bazer. i agree with hidden technique neuker nice throws but the name sumo is way played out bro not just because theres one dude that writes it but because ive seen like ten new guys come on here in the past couple weeks all writing it. but that dont mean u shouldnt be doin it. dawsek just keep goin doood try new w stuff. a skettchhy penmobile i did in class today theres some lines throught the letters and stuff but i decided to break from my simpler stuff. (in the bottom pic.) should i go with this style or try and bend out the bottom style.? says dason yeah the S blows