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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. inkbits

    inkbits Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10562246.jpg

    *edit: by SUMOE

    shit WTF did I do...

    sorry bout that...inkbits, I tried to bump this without all the crits u did but I fucked up...

    so my bad for deleting every single fuckin' crit you gave...it must've took mad long, my bad :(

    I'm new at this mod shit.
     
  2. Seti

    Seti Elite Member

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    thats lush m8, its got a nice overall format and simetrical shape,lotsa developments defenatly gone into ur work....mine sez more, first sketch ive donw for a while, but i got into it.
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    crits welcome..
     
  3. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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    inkbits - i love the way you have kinda cut the letters in half and then done stuff with it..... <3

    seti - erm...i think you should go simpler. if you try to do the 3d thing, try shading the letters instead of having block colours. and make the letter a bit more obvious.

    heres something i did...
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    ARE YOU READY?
     
  4. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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  5. HuntingLOLs

    HuntingLOLs Senior Member

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    Mints: cut off the 3d. to do that you pick a length on your 3d and try as much as possible to keep it while looking at the place where they start compared to the last spot. example
    you pick a length of 1 inch. then you take the easiest place first, thats the top of the t. then you cut off the lines 1 inch from the letter and make the symetrical line that the t has (althought shorter, coz of the 3d has a vanishing point that makes the gap between the lines smaller). goes for all letters... this will make it look better

    next you try to push the letters together and keep working on simples (getting sick of that advice :p)
     
  6. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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  7. Klone

    Klone Senior Member

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    you're so awesome man. [/b][/quote]
    haha i like that im diggen that foreal.
     
  8. FIN one

    FIN one Senior Member

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  10. anie 1

    anie 1 Senior Member

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    haha i like that im diggen that foreal. [/b][/quote]
    lovin it maaan :D
     
  11. beastie_1989

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  12. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    beastie that is fresh
     
  13. whoarethereal evil

    whoarethereal evil Elite Member

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    coz inkbits was sick with all that feedback and he asked 4 a throwie close up (its a bit shoddy but im lazy):


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    i stuck a s on

    coz im mint



    but yeah feedback on this???
     
  14. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    Bigel throw style is fresh..like...eggs...fresh out the box eggs...fresh from the chickens anus..but..these eggs..are fresh from the golden rooster with the golden anus...i mean..look at these throws..

    Good to see WhoaretherealEVIILLLL in here..i dont think iv ever sen a peice from you matey..like the throw anyway..

    Amen..im feelin them letters...very funkay..very clean..i like clean..but..the leters are kinda different sizes...YA MEEEENN

    ugh..ima have a simple up soon..with a karak.. <_< ..i bringing that EMO idea back up :lol: ;)
     
  15. 10 Ton

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    It's not horrible but it look slike you added some random stuff in just to have more things in there. Simple can still be good, infact unless you are really experienced, its better as well. To try to come out right away with real complicated stuff isnt posible, but this isnt to complicated, just a little sloppy. Even though its just a throwie, you should still take the time to visualize what you want it to look like, and if you are visualizing something you know you cant do, just practice it.

    Apart from that the shading is a little off. If you want a monodirectional shading effect, all of your corners should be coming off of the characters at the same angle. On the right side you have shading going all around the letter while on the bottoms of the other ones its coming off the bottom left.

    Then up top the shading is coming off the right side, when it should be the left. just try making your shading/3d effects more uniform, so it looks like an object that is physical and you can touch, like a block.


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    Some crits on my stuff would be good

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    a simple block letter tag

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    a simple bubble letter tag

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    another simple peice with a few characters in it. started out just as me practicing characters and then decided to make a peice out of it.

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    Im pretty proud of this one.



    Feedback well apreciated.

    :D
     
  16. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    Take your own advice mate :(
     
  17. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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  18. Noddles912300

    Noddles912300 Senior Member

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    10 ton lose the first one do simples, use the bar method (look in the just starting out thread or the turtorial thread.)
     
  19. 10 Ton

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  20. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    you aint ready for wildstyle..trust me..go simple..blocks...construct letters like Noodle said..