[Broken External Image]:http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10562246.jpg *edit: by SUMOE shit WTF did I do... sorry bout that...inkbits, I tried to bump this without all the crits u did but I fucked up... so my bad for deleting every single fuckin' crit you gave...it must've took mad long, my bad I'm new at this mod shit.
thats lush m8, its got a nice overall format and simetrical shape,lotsa developments defenatly gone into ur work....mine sez more, first sketch ive donw for a while, but i got into it. crits welcome..
inkbits - i love the way you have kinda cut the letters in half and then done stuff with it..... <3 seti - erm...i think you should go simpler. if you try to do the 3d thing, try shading the letters instead of having block colours. and make the letter a bit more obvious. heres something i did... [Broken External Image]:http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1527/116if8.jpg ARE YOU READY?
Mints: cut off the 3d. to do that you pick a length on your 3d and try as much as possible to keep it while looking at the place where they start compared to the last spot. example you pick a length of 1 inch. then you take the easiest place first, thats the top of the t. then you cut off the lines 1 inch from the letter and make the symetrical line that the t has (althought shorter, coz of the 3d has a vanishing point that makes the gap between the lines smaller). goes for all letters... this will make it look better next you try to push the letters together and keep working on simples (getting sick of that advice )
psilo - i suggest easing up off the wierd bits of the letters. keep 'em simple quick photoshop thing.. [Broken External Image]:http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6060/untitled1rb6.jpg
this is as far as i can take this thing without completley erasing the paper away you can give me suggestions but at this point its like "ugh i want to get this part finished" i kinda got the idea for the bottom of the Y from Sumes thing a few pages back.i dont think its a bite tho. so yeah, peace [Broken External Image]:http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/7518/maysa3fj6.jpg
looks pretty dope but take a pic from above next time cause its kinda hard to see FIN: that is pretty dope I like the extentions BIG EL::wub: that is soo dope I wanna see one of your throws in paint.
something new, i hate my N [Broken External Image]:http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/7274/dsc00353ja9.jpg
coz inkbits was sick with all that feedback and he asked 4 a throwie close up (its a bit shoddy but im lazy): View attachment 265445 i stuck a s on coz im mint but yeah feedback on this???
Bigel throw style is fresh..like...eggs...fresh out the box eggs...fresh from the chickens anus..but..these eggs..are fresh from the golden rooster with the golden anus...i mean..look at these throws.. Good to see WhoaretherealEVIILLLL in here..i dont think iv ever sen a peice from you matey..like the throw anyway.. Amen..im feelin them letters...very funkay..very clean..i like clean..but..the leters are kinda different sizes...YA MEEEENN ugh..ima have a simple up soon..with a karak.. <_< ..i bringing that EMO idea back up :lol:
It's not horrible but it look slike you added some random stuff in just to have more things in there. Simple can still be good, infact unless you are really experienced, its better as well. To try to come out right away with real complicated stuff isnt posible, but this isnt to complicated, just a little sloppy. Even though its just a throwie, you should still take the time to visualize what you want it to look like, and if you are visualizing something you know you cant do, just practice it. Apart from that the shading is a little off. If you want a monodirectional shading effect, all of your corners should be coming off of the characters at the same angle. On the right side you have shading going all around the letter while on the bottoms of the other ones its coming off the bottom left. Then up top the shading is coming off the right side, when it should be the left. just try making your shading/3d effects more uniform, so it looks like an object that is physical and you can touch, like a block. ------------------------------- Some crits on my stuff would be good View attachment 265451 a simple block letter tag View attachment 265452 a simple bubble letter tag View attachment 265453 another simple peice with a few characters in it. started out just as me practicing characters and then decided to make a peice out of it. View attachment 265454 Im pretty proud of this one. Feedback well apreciated.
10 ton - i would just keep on keeping on with the simples [Broken External Image]:http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1527/116if8.jpg ARE YOU READY? [Broken External Image]:http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6060/untitled1rb6.jpg crits?
10 ton lose the first one do simples, use the bar method (look in the just starting out thread or the turtorial thread.)