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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
crits(i hate colering in w/colerd pencil anny one now how to make it none sketchie)
stop using all those lame ass arrows and extensions dude. stick to some black and white sketches and work on more simple letters.
i third that, def. work on simples
kors: i like that last one out of all those, work on your K and the upper part of the S
all of them look legit.. but i dont like the K's, everything else is tight though!
GAuge: take out the kinks man and work on your 3d, ur only get get better if you put ur all into it don't half ass a sketch, clean straight lines look at the new to graff thread
chalk - il simples man, your coloring and marker skills are real nice your shit pops of the page
gauge - check the new to graff thread, use bars and go simple
kors - best one is the fourth one down , nice and simple with a lil flair keep it up man,
glass - it looks too bumpy, you got structure down tho so just experiment with what you feel, and i was liking that A in the other style a few page back
phobia - do exactly same as what i told gauge to do
crits before i ink? extensions to take out etc, there is antoher page what the end of the R is on but it is only a lil bit so i couldnt be bothered to scan it
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NO! NO FUCKING RULERS OR TEH KINGZ OF GRAFFFF WILL DE5TR0Y JOO!!11!! LOLLERCOPTER
but on a serious note, using a ruler is like using a nicer marker. If you know how to use it, it'll help make your stuff look cleaner and whatnot. Just don't get dependent on it.
rayes- I dunno man, it doesn't seem to flow to me.
silent- It's bitchin', but i can't really find the 'd'
glas- Instead of starting with extensions, try fucking with thicker letters and varing bar thicknesses, and making that flow. That's the meat, extensions are just salt.
guage- see the one chalk did with the orange forcefield? try doing that, but with fewer colors and no 3d. Don't try to spice it up yet either.
Rayseone: the bottom of the 's' and 'e' is too busy in my opinion, ink her
rays: i like all the letters but the E, top and bottom legs look weird somehow. keep it up.
silent: love that fill man, very sick
first new thing tried in a while, i think the G needs some work but im not sure what. crits?
latest doodle and some shit for some girl i did to big & od'd on the color scheme just a tad and am to lazy to finish.. not up to par with the rest of the shit in this thread but im only 16 getting there slowly
i love trippy fills.
i personally think the first one is ill.
i think if you went all out and made the bottom one like, ridiculously symmetrical, it would look pretty cool.
GLASS - i really like that style, i think to fix the G you should make the bottem part of the "C" shape curve up at a sharper angle so that the thick arrow looking part dosnt stick out so much,
also i think that the g and s overlap the other letters too much
hope that made sense
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Should I keep going or keep it simpler for now?
simplerrrr u wer gettin good at the simpler ones
crayons are dope!!
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hungr - hot shit like always
drak - tone it down
qeenz style - ill fill
i lick the nuts at throwies. crits?
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