stop using all those lame ass arrows and extensions dude. stick to some black and white sketches and work on more simple letters.
i third that, def. work on simples kors: i like that last one out of all those, work on your K and the upper part of the S
GAuge: take out the kinks man and work on your 3d, ur only get get better if you put ur all into it don't half ass a sketch, clean straight lines look at the new to graff thread
chalk - il simples man, your coloring and marker skills are real nice your shit pops of the page gauge - check the new to graff thread, use bars and go simple kors - best one is the fourth one down , nice and simple with a lil flair keep it up man, glass - it looks too bumpy, you got structure down tho so just experiment with what you feel, and i was liking that A in the other style a few page back phobia - do exactly same as what i told gauge to do crits before i ink? extensions to take out etc, there is antoher page what the end of the R is on but it is only a lil bit so i couldnt be bothered to scan it [Broken External Image]:http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/6476/lastscaneo5.jpg
NO! NO FUCKING RULERS OR TEH KINGZ OF GRAFFFF WILL DE5TR0Y JOO!!11!! LOLLERCOPTER but on a serious note, using a ruler is like using a nicer marker. If you know how to use it, it'll help make your stuff look cleaner and whatnot. Just don't get dependent on it. rayes- I dunno man, it doesn't seem to flow to me. silent- It's bitchin', but i can't really find the 'd' glas- Instead of starting with extensions, try fucking with thicker letters and varing bar thicknesses, and making that flow. That's the meat, extensions are just salt. guage- see the one chalk did with the orange forcefield? try doing that, but with fewer colors and no 3d. Don't try to spice it up yet either.
rays: i like all the letters but the E, top and bottom legs look weird somehow. keep it up. silent: love that fill man, very sick first new thing tried in a while, i think the G needs some work but im not sure what. crits?
latest doodle and some shit for some girl i did to big & od'd on the color scheme just a tad and am to lazy to finish.. not up to par with the rest of the shit in this thread but im only 16 getting there slowly
ahhh! i love trippy fills. i personally think the first one is ill. checka? i think if you went all out and made the bottom one like, ridiculously symmetrical, it would look pretty cool.
GLASS - i really like that style, i think to fix the G you should make the bottem part of the "C" shape curve up at a sharper angle so that the thick arrow looking part dosnt stick out so much, also i think that the g and s overlap the other letters too much hope that made sense
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hungr - hot shit like always drak - tone it down qeenz style - ill fill i lick the nuts at throwies. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/9651/dsc00320uk2.jpg