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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Seyar-the S the E and the A are great.Work on the the Y and R.


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    Back to my good ways.
     
  2. ILuvHoodRats

    ILuvHoodRats Senior Member

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    Drop The Fuckin Arrows Man.
     
  3. :-l

    :-l Senior Member

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    dont fill the negative space with black, just create more negative space so it flows better as a throw
     
  4. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    when you first posed here i thaught' oh god not another toy that wont lissten to any crits and complain about doin blocks' but uv improved so fucking fast, ur developing a nice lil style ther. i know in a year or 2 if keep it up ull be dope,
    stay up!!
     
  5. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    Drak i like your stuf but i think you should start painting simples now at a chill spot cause when you get better at sketching and you try to paint it.. youl be embarrased
     
  6. ODonthesetrees

    ODonthesetrees Elite Member

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    nah you dont want to make more negative space, jsut make the letters so they fill that space on their own, the part at the e you could easily fix jsut keep the middle chunk out as fasr as the other two peices...you need to work on your throw letters alot though, loook at some bomb throws liek kismet and shit to get more ideas on the different styles, tright now youre doign liek mindgem bubble letters
     
  7. raveone

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  8. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    rave: wayyyyyyyy too many arrows and extensions. lose all the extra stuff and revert back and do lots and lots of simples, go check out the new 2 graff thread in the Main Toy Forum Index to get what i mean.
     
  9. raveone

    raveone Member

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  10. scoot

    scoot Elite Member

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    whats the point of comming to get crits if ur not gonna take them
     
  11. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    youve got too mouch extensions in the background, the bottom left leg of the R should definately not connect to the V, it always takes something away from the peice if you have extensions stetching long ways through the peice, unless it is done correctly, and dont have arrows at the bottom pointing 2 different directions cuz it looks super awkward. pretty sweet idea for the background tho.c also didnt u post most of the recent peices you just posted like a month ago or so?
     
  12. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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    Rave I saw that one simple you did with that nice fill, that was good. Why you just posted is lacking alot of the things needed to make that style work. If you're going to try and make that work, keep pounding outlines out and you'll eventually get the flow down, but I'd say keep working on your basic letters, because the last ones were pretty weak.
     
  13. raveone

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    i didnt ask for crits and i said no thanks. i like it the way it is
     
  14. raveone

    raveone Member

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    ai83.photobucket.com_albums_j285_Kawasaki72_DSCF0002_16.jpg

    simple

    i did it at a faimly reunion
     
    Last edited: Jul 7, 2007
  15. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    well we dont, so ether take advice and change it or dont post

    edit use bars to make ur letters, doing simpels isnt enough, if the letters suck
     
  16. raveone

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    i posted to just show it,




    this is a block buster i did, should have took my time

    ai83.photobucket.com_albums_j285_Kawasaki72_DSCF0002_16.jpg
     
  17. giganticCrane

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  18. scoot

    scoot Elite Member

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    ur letter structure is good.. but the rest just hurts my eyes
     
  19. scoot

    scoot Elite Member

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  20. SEKT

    SEKT Member

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    SCOOT - your 3d on the left most side of the "G" is nonexistent