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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Akshun

    Akshun Senior Member

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    nez- in the first one get rid of the letters inside the letters u know it would look so much better without that. the bottom one man thats nice except the e should be a lil bigger, and the tope of the z shoudl be str8 liek the bottom of it yadadamean

    pron and real-give crits and u get them back

    jers-already commented

    minesweep-go for str8 letters man dont bend or do nothing to em make em fat and str8 and ull be suprised how much u like it. and get ur lines straight. stop drinking coffee and doing acid they give u shaky hands lol.
  2. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    jers nice man real clean
    tasty nice stuff keep that style up
    minesweep i like ur e
    real u have to many wraparounds on ur letters
    it says ditm
  3. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    yeah so ok

    Sinn- I actually really like that, its very nice. colors are good and letters look fine, only thing I would fix IMO is the left middle bar of the D, for some reason it looks to thin. keep it up.
    Nez- work on your e's other than that the N and Z look pretty tight.
    Pron- pretty clean except you must work on your letters. start out using bars like |. once you get that down start bendin em.:cool:
    Real- its hard to see, from what I see though the letters looks pretty good, but its hard to tell with all those arrows, its like covering up the letter structure. (maybe try a sketch without them)
    Jers- looks real good, but the E looks a little funky. looks real good though.
    Minesweep- definetly lose the drop shadow for now, it makes it kindof hard to see the letters, fatten up your letters a bit too.
    Dim- looks real ill, realll ill, only thing is the T looks like a lower case R. nice though.
    Anom- that M looks pretty good, O looks to squished in there, space it out a bit.

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    ok so basically I hardly got any crits(thanks for those of you who did)
    mind the colors and the spider man leg, and the missing 3d in the middle. I messed this one up coloring. Crits on the structure would be good.
  4. thanks for the crits
    dizzle d - Try to get rid of that upside down V in the B though, other than that it looks good.
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  5. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  6. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    Hidden technique. that is fuckin dope. i dont think theres much improvement to do. paint it quick.

    Dim. i love each letter individually. but together they dont flow try to make them more evenly sized. and a littlle more symetrical or flowy.
  7. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    cyto kinda looks like draks style
    just fuckin around
  8. cyber one

    cyber one Senior Member

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  9. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    Mr Tasty: i love that s.
    klipa: nice coloring but im not really feeling it. i really like the first se though.
    -Sinn-: yeah i like it sin
    NEZ89: looking good. just keep it up. i like your handies. maybe make that e a capitol e.
    pr0n: no.
    REAL: i like it. maybe lose a few arrows like everyone said.
    jersOneTIC: show your s off more.
    minesweep: thick bars and letters shorter.
    dim: lose the arrows but im feelin that d
    Hidden Teknique: i dont know. that n looks like a m. you have nice handies though.
    dizzle_d: lose the random arrows at the end. i liek it other than that.
    Cyto Aka Son1c: i cant really see what it says.
    silentchaos14: now bring your letters closer together.

    heres my latest. critz? excuse the shitty coloring.
  10. cerex89

    cerex89 Senior Member

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    that handie is killing me that S is all over the place and the C has a different flow from ur other letters
  11. Dusk07

    Dusk07 Senior Member

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    bumpin this. nice and simple. nice flow dude. i like it.
  12. stumpyhasnolegs

    stumpyhasnolegs Member

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  13. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    mad ugly, start again
  14. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    bump cuz bottom of page
  15. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    ^^^goddamnit morne, bumpin your shit, let it sit for a while, if noone crits it then bump, thes letters need work, get some lined paper and stop wasting pages of a bbook
  16. sKeeLo

    sKeeLo Senior Member

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    phlank - i would try to not end your letters/bars with an arrow, maybe its just me thoo . . your proportions seem off but if you keep rockin that style and practicing things will come together . . .

    kelio - it looks like your bars are alil too long n thin, thicker stouter bars may be easier to get down . .

    morne - dont pay no mind to borg man, its your bbook fill that bitch then start on a new one . . . but i did fill up the cheap lined notebooks when i was startin out . . .
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  17. cerex89

    cerex89 Senior Member

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    thats my signature but thanks
  18. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    morne keep using the bars ur deffenatly making an im provement but when u do ur o dont do the jagged things on the corners
    escobar on ur s there is to much space in between the bottom part of the s to the top part and the bars that kinda stick out of ur letters make u loose ur flow in the peice
    cyer dope flow man keep it up