daisy: drop the random extensions, its gonna look better
HapeP: love ur fill in


for my gf, not alot of stucture, i just went wild cause i wanted to impress her
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Did it get you laid? If not, it was wasted time you could have spent practicing structure. Otherwise, good job.

(ps. I don't speak for everyone when I say this, but I don't think alternating colors is any good. Whenever I see it it makes the sketch look tacky.)

 

its not a waste of time if u like to sketch

 

I meant you could have been working on progression sketching instead of random overcomplication.

 

i know, i clearly said that i knew it had no structure and that it was jsutto impress her with a "wilder" lookin sketch then i usually do

 

HadeP - dam that shit is fuckin fresh.
daisyface - its clean as hell, n the arrows dont really matter. in or out its still nice.
cits? just some shit.

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love- the L and O on the top in the left hand corner is pretty nice would be good in a throwie
crits on my stuff




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anyone want to help me make a d for this one ive been trying for a week on the d

 

i like it, but your E is looking a bit funky and
you need to work on your colouring skills...
...it just looks kinda messy, know i mean?
oh btw, where abouts in calgary you at?

 

Dena I would say go WAY SIMPLER. Right now you have no letter structure

 

View attachment 320683 tryiing to figure a decent throw up out.

 

you both are from calgary too?

 

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This sketch looks better in person. Callobo with KASPER7, Skeleton Character=KASPER7.

 

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old

 

^ i like the style not very clean though and could use some 3d

 

south west. pm for more info.
yeah i kinda just freestyled the fill haha
i usually plan it out more but i had to go meet up with this chick.

 

weda- i think you should ditch the arrow on the d and just make an arrow on the w and a but make the arrow on your a point to the right if you know what im sayin
love- use bars and work on simples
dena- start completely fresh and do keyboard letters for now
pube- looks pretty sick
azteka- very fresh
fuck my ''a'' two letter on card bord
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critsss

 

2nd one's alright

 

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