i think the y looks out of place because of the curves can everyone see this? because last time i just got skipped over gasm- i agree with garbage, thats a nice g. the one on the bottom doesn't really look like a g, i think its because of that thin extension. you could try the top of the s with just like a straight horizontal line and see how that works. peer- go simpler for now, i can see you're using bars but your letters are in consistent, keep all the bars the same width. the e's are ok just keep them consistent and round the other letters a bit more because they are the only rounded letters
quickie in a friends book View attachment 387024 crits? Letsgobombin - your R is a little awkward. fix the bottom bar to curve out maybe instead of in.
smoothz glad to see your using the bar method! if there is one thing that can help any "new to graff" advance, its the bar method the R is my favorite of yours because its the simplest.(if thats a word) and the O as for the k and the t, the heart things arent quite working, and i htink thats because they are a little random and disporportionate...but idk i know this is the bbook thread, but i hope this helps...just some simples that i did, thats where the bar method got me so far anyways... sorry, some of the letters kinda got a throwie look to some of them, but its what i got for now. ignore the GCSK throw in the backround, CLOSER is the main word of the flick
ummm i've used bars since i started writing fool,i've only not used it a couple times out of bordem....and pratice what you preach man,and yeah i think the SPADE on the k doesnt work cause i made it to fat but ya know im just dicking with different letters i'll bust out some more tonight since im not going any thanks to this fucking sun burn! haha
haha word...i cant use arrows worth a shit and i can barely use the spade...just trying something new ya know cant get any better if dont try somethign different every so often
smooth- lookin good for sure, throw a peice together usin those. down to exchange peices sometime? syerf- im just not feelin it, use some bars or make it a throw lol task- letters are lookin good, im not feelin the teo big extensions comin off of the t, but i see why you did them letsgobombing- try to make the letters look different from the handy, i cant really think of anything else to say gasm- feelin your style alot, the g and s you put in your last post are dope. i like the top of the g how it is and try what letsgobombing said for the s
seyar, doap? imma end up puttin on here either tonight or tomorrow for sure, prolly just gonna be a pen freezy so no worries on colors or anything
thats what they call me edit* same thing i was gonna do man,i almot never use colors haha... bump for a new page
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