Heres mine. It reads Jarb which is what I write. I have a few others however they are all fairly similar. I aint into all those fancy-ass complex tags that you can't even read, simple and bold is my style Tell me how I can Improve/Whats good or wrong with it [Broken External Image]:http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e296/mf_farny/JarbTag.jpg
Jarb, that doesn't look too bad, I really like that 'J', the rest of the tag is OK but it's like it's too sharp and straight at the moment, I think it needs to be a little more curvey and flowey in some places. Meeting the equilibrium of sharpness and softness is a big part of making a tag look good. Slow, the 'SL' is nice, it's got good style. But then it's like your 'OW' doesn't have much style at all. 'O's and 'W's seem to be hard to give good style (well for me anyways) but it's definetly not impossible. So yeah, just work on those last two letters and I reckon it will come out nice. And thanks to everyone for crits on my tag.
You think that is good? Your stupid, thatis horrible. Way to jumbled up and to much crap going on, the definition of a toy handy. Now this is a good handy [Broken External Image]:http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/3576/slap01ea4.jpg Its got nice flow, and its nice and simple, not jumbled, letters arent to far apart. arent going over eachother to much, there isnt a million arrows, or even one for that matter.
Sense, that's pretty good but it would look a lot better if your second 's' was the same as the first and the second 'e' was the same as the first. Have you been writing for long? You might want to consider dropping an 'S' and an 'E' for another letter or two. Quite a few people get frustrated with having double ups of a letter and in this case you have two doubles ups. Whatever, it's just a thought. 747, The picture is way to small to give it crits dude. EDIT: Cheers for that AO.
Either way, I still can't see the tag but what I can see doesn't look that flash. ANd tagging on someones door? What's up with that?
its not someones door, its some sattelite place through this hole in the fence i saw while walking the tracks.....
slow looks good. maby try pulling the right side of the W out more to the left and a little bit down, but keep the hook. so that it come up to the poin it is now. just to keep the whole thing from looking so perfectly straight and narrow
Yeah, I see what you mean, I think I'll just get rid of the loops and work on that for a while. Any help with makin' an O, it just kinda sits there I don't know what to do with it.