yeah, I've changed the D and R ill send a flic soon

 

Can control needs some work but not a bad start. Keep doing you thing. For me, learning to be able to move a little faster helps some style progress.

Especially with throws, you want to be able to get them done pretty quick.

 

Here's some inspiration or ideas for filling the space in the T and L

 

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i think this is pretty good, criticism is appreciated, and i have been going for almost a year, i quit when i got caught, but i have changed the D, E, K and R since the last flic.

 

Link doesn't want to work.

 

Crits or tips to make this better

 

if the first one is an s, i would say remove that extra bit in the middle, also the b is a little unreadable, i think the m is pretty good. overall great but it seems too forced. have fun w it and just practice until the marker goes dry. also if the last letter isn't a b its pretty good, i like the point and the fact its not connected, gives it a little more life.

 

I'm also not sure what the last letter is. This is why we say letter structure is so important. Even crazy wild styles have it whether you realize it or not.

The first S I assume, looks like it got bonked on the head in a cartoon and had a big lump lol

The M is nice and still has the structure of an M

 

Any tips?

 

do straights a little before u start fuckin wit throws brotha n make sure all the letters the same size

 

The little butt on the a looks weird, and I feel like your S and A don't match the N and K. Maybe an upper case A?

Also try and keep them more or less the same width/size (which i didnt do in my doodle lol)

 

Thanks for the tips. Appreciate it

 

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Throws throws throws

 

The last upload is the best one in my opinion the picture with the brick wall that sais 'seo'

 

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