Skribble- I like the character, but as for the piece i dont know, it seems kind of messy, for example some of the extensions are kind of random, and the letter structure aint that good. But for the other pieces they are dope lovin the 3d Lol but i am just a toy so that just my oppinion. Phish- I like the extension on the "P", but the "H" doesent seem to appeal to me. Sole- its okay, but i dont like the "S" that much, good simple though. Like i said guys i am probaly one of the biggest toyes as you about to see with this sketch, but i am just passing on advice people have given me. [Broken External Image]:http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/5213/scan0001yh9.jpg critz please
bump I was first i want some comment on these am I going into the right direction? and do you have tips to make it more interesting?
code - lose the arrows. the really dont work and go simpler. try less rounded letters crits on mine plz? [Broken External Image]:http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/purplengreythrow.jpg
Hey, ty for the crit. So now it my turn, I really lovin the simple would make a sick roller, but for some reason the "Y" just seems not to go with the flow. Not sure why but it doesent seem to go with the other 2 letters.
JAY - looking good, that 3D's pretty well done. The Y is still a little off, though. I think it would look tight if you kept the tail of the y on the same level as the bottom of the J and A and not have it dip down like it is. Also, make sure all the lines stay at an even thickness. KRIM - looking pretty good, that camo fill is pretty nice. My only suggestion is to bring the I over to the right a bit more, so it stands out better from the R and M. Now my turn. I did this a week ago instead of paying attention in Calculus... I always feel like I draw my best when I'm doodling in class. I'm pretty proud of the police officer, but I also liked the old men on right, which came about by me trying to draw without lifting the pen from the paper. Comments? Opinions?
Sum: dope character for sure, but try not to add to many ruffles in the clothes, your giving way to much emphasis on baggyness.
Sum, the character is decent, but it definitely needs some work. The arms and legs are too short in comparison to the torso and head. Also, you went a little overboard with the crease lines. If you work on those, it could be pretty dope.
[Broken External Image]:http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/623/jimmypanpz7.png it says rasta crits anyone?
rasta- Its okay. Needs alot of work. Make your letters evenly spaced. For instance the first a is hidden a bit too much. Your letters need more structure too. Take your time as well. No need to rush through your throws. I can see your trying to rush it, like your doing it on a wall. Try to master each letter first and then put them together and see what you come up with.
[Broken External Image]:http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4420/paskthingob4.png fixed my bomb a little its says pask crits?
no hes just my frend(not the one who spammed) and i coppied his code by accident also im on his username right now so this is testify crits?
crits on the canvass you cant see the yellow that much cosue its flairing and i editied it like mad [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4286/picture89vl2.jpg[/URL crits