yo sema your sketches have a bit too many add ons n shit. i think try some more simple sketches to improve your letter structure.
working on putting on decent tabs that dont look all stumpy. I is to thin and the extensions are a little uneven but o wells. sky5? [Broken External Image]:http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture061.jpg
dont worry about letter structure so much, ur letters look to stiff, cut loose, and start angling and makin em fit in . keep it up man/.
SEMA go simple, simples are the foundation for everything. Look at RIES piece, you can see that he knows his simples. RIES that is pretty ill. My tag on the last page says AYMO. I thought it way okay, but apparently not. Can I get some advice on it? Can you even read it? I dont want to bump my shit again I already bumped it once accidently. Someone else can if they want though, or just give me advice on my tag it they could. Thanks.
these are cyrillic letters anyway i want to share it with you PS. I'm waiting for aces he always gives me best advices this is about two months old
Haha thanks man...Is it YAH??? If so the Y is pretty nice but the A is wicked jumbled up in there...Can't even tell what's going on...H is pretty good too and teh coloring is really nice...Overall its not bad aside from the A/whatever it is.
Cokkey - Lovin the colors man... Someone told me that bring the "U" closer and have em over lap a lil more... Overlap more or? EDIT: Crits fellas?
[Broken External Image]:http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/270/12222022wy.jpg did this in the dark last night . . . did dark colors b/c i had big plans for my pink pen but it wouldnt go over the black, u cant really see the outline in the pic but your not missing much ..som crappy pencil sketches to fill up the pic . . dont know how inkbits, cezr, jar and a few others posts werent bumped to new pages . . . real nice work ries - it def looks better with cleaner more defined tabs, keep playin with em and soon enough youlll have em down . . .letters do look abit stiff thoo but you can focus on that later (probaly will be abitch cuz you will have to re-examine and tweak your whole letter structure, adding tabs is easy) . . where yuor at now might be a good time to practice painting this style and getting it down before you add anything else to the outline
yea i like this shit alot^^, its weird the "obey" peice doesn't even look like it was you who did it. [/b][/quote] well, i did it in a completly different way. just tryin new stuff. believe it or not i like it when people just trash the hell out of what i do. because thats how u get better.
KRUM : nice, not really feeling the bubbles though. HEISK : H kinda looks like a K, but its real nice. SKY 5: unlucky about thee pink pen, love it though. ok, so i've had a bigg writer's block since the beginning of the xmas holidays. i managed to finally push this out, tell me what you think... [Broken External Image]:http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5822/960fw.jpg it says CRA, crits?
fube - i really wanna trash the hell out of it for ya but for the most part it looks like you did it exactly how you wanted it to which is hard to do . . . the top right of the E looks alil woobly, maybe make the bottom squiggly part of the E bigger or longer so it sticks out farther right b.c right now the middle part of the E and teh bottom squigly part of teh E end at about the same length . . .
ima try to post flicks tonight, i have a bunch. seaz i have the exchange for you done but its just a quick pencil sketch. peace!
nice props for that! [/b][/quote] really now? it doesnt say shit sta se foliras batooooo? to all the people i owe a sketch, i have caer, melo, nemz, and cezr's done ill post em all up at once. when i finish