cezr - never cease to amaze me, love your letters :wub: sema - you have potential keep workin those letters, really like the a, but the other letters are kinda lackin, speciall the e. just my 2 cents. tryin to progress my letters, really fucked up the k but... i need advice. been doin simples for a while and now im tryin to tweak em..
BUMBING FOR CRITS....CRITS PLEASE.... sory bout the link shit,i fucked up posting the image.yeh i like that alot sank nice and simple maybe overlap them just a lil bit more peace
[Broken External Image]:http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/8889/1222238xi3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9218/1222240he3.jpg yeah yeah what cezr said plus theres no ego down here (atleast not thrown at me) 2nd abstract city sketch, started with a J but stopped doing letters and just drew . . . added a sewer system, probaly will have something crawling or coming out one of em in teh next sketch ... took out the highway S but added a loop O . . so far i haev pretty good J, E, S and Os in this style (secretly pms koper about next weekly battle being JESO) stem - that aint bad, good approach, i would just keep sketchin, the sharp point on the M looks alil akward compared to teh otehr letters .
sema, thats sick, not really feelin the S and A, i would make the S spread not connected but still fat, and for the A i would make that side thing skinnier. but its still really good heres some shit of mine: ^supposed to be smoke, i was gunna fill it with gray but never got a chance to ^experimenting, it looked better w/o the blue
Bump...sorry but that bottom fill is fresh and Sky 5 has got the Sky line goin ooon Cezr...watta geezer...nice shit...i just bought an lemon squeezer Stem...wooo....stop whining damn...the E and O are funkay...but..the C and M are tooo original..imo
Cezr and sky you both need to help me improve my fills, I'm going to call you guv'ners 'fillmaster C' and 'fillmaster S' from now on k. Fillmaster S: some little charicters popping out the windows and shit in that 3D sketch would look wicked imo. Would be an awesome style to run up on canvas and would probally appeal artistically even to folks that don't write, you picked that shit up quick man. Basic: I'm not real big on the cloud looking stuff man but your linework in that looks fairly decently controlled. you should work on simples and work at making them that clean.
cezr, that yells might be the best letters ive seen from you, shit is just all around hotttt, i cant get my fills sexy like that skyzy, i love your other style, but im just not feeeling the 3D at all, at first glance its kinda cool, but it just looks really messy, and im not a fan of the letters, i dunno, maybe im just an asshole? lol, still better 3D than i could ever pull out of my ass though Basic, i suggest listening to your name and making your eltters basic as well, actually first suggest not writing basic, because one of my favourite writers on this site 9 when he sketches anyways) sketches basik, id dig up pics but im lazy
Cezr- Thats so sick, everyone looks just as good as the other, (if you ever have time and nothing to write, try and hit me up with my name and if you want i try and hit u back with something half as good as urs) Sky - That looks amazing, I would totally paint something along that lines in my bedroom wall if i were able to do something like that, Thats something i could wake up to every morning. Fube- Feelin the 3rd One thats it, you said tryin new stuff so i totally understand cuz i know your good shits hott. Basic- Saaaaame adivce everyone told everyone else in the toy forum - BASICS you just know that just by ur name. Im also not feelin the name but you know, thats not for me to crit. But yah try drawing our your letters like you see them on the keyboard and when you get that down beef them up with sum shadow or 3D or something along that lines. Everyone starts off with the basics at one point, so i suggest you do the same. Sank- Maybe try throwing some 3D and color in it. The letters arent too bad though, just try beefin it up. Sema- Lovin the whole thing but the fill. No Pictures right now, damn writers block . Hope to have some up soon.
cezr- shits dope. the extension of the Y is nice, but i dont like the extension on the E so much. it makes the piece seem somewhat lop-sided. but the L's and S are both sexy, and the fill is dope as hell. sema- looking pretty good. colors and 3d are both good but the letters are inconsistent. like parts of the A is really skinny compared to parts of the E or R. so if they were all more similar, shit'd be alot nicer. stay up sky5- very phenominal my friend. shits off the wall basic- not feelin the first one. bottom one is better but keep working on the letters. work on he vanishing point.
Sky 5 holy shit sooooooo fuckin sick the shading is amazing and the blue around it just makes it look that much sicker
View attachment 247655 I know it sucks, alot but Ive only been graffing for a couple of days now. Any and all crits and advice will be appreciated.
wow u need to read up on your history if u havent and get one of those toy graff alphibets thats how i started the you will develop style as you go
^^do some simple letters dont use mr wiggles lil one from me, took the handy style from dome. View attachment 247659
wow u need to read up on your history if u havent and get one of those toy graff alphibets thats how i started the you will develop style as you go [/b][/quote] were can i get one of those? and were cani read up on the history? sorry for the stupid questions, but again ive only been trying to graff for a couple of days.
dont use those toy alphabets. just draw simple letters from ur keyboard, read the new to graff thread. as for the history go on google video and watch some vids like style wars state your name etc chek out the vid thread in main disscussion.
WILD SPIT FIRE.. Is that Smith in your sig.. ? sorry caser...but just aint feeling it...the addon on the A looks perfect tho