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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    its like..the out line is dead..slowly you can when you go to outline with the stop..let the ink bleed..then go on..and do ti again..creating a very rough unclean outline..ten again..that could be your style/...then again..i coudlnt really the letters are okay..
  2. flclnaruto1213

    flclnaruto1213 Elite Member

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  3. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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    the u and the m on this are not the best ive seen from you, the left half of the u (especially the top) seems to be leaning the wrong way, but that s could be my favorite yet.

    i like it how you lead strong with the S and finish strong with the E in your more recent pieces. it gives your stuff a great sense of proportion and balance. i also like the extensions on this one way more then on some of your earlier pieces becuz they're not overkilled, just enuf to give it style, but not look forced.

    fuckin hell for your age your unbelievably talented, if i were you id look into art school after you graduate. good work.
  4. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    already took it out :)
  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    thanks a lot man, for some reason it was hard for me to do a good "U" and "M" in this one, I still got a little bit of writer's block...

    but yeah, I am lookin' at art colleges, but right now I'm a Sophomore and next year I was thinkin' of going into my art program, you pretty much take all art classes, but my dad isn't really into this art shit, he says it's hard to get a good job with art as a major and I should focus more on academic shit...anyways thanks again. How old are you?
  6. Torrent

    Torrent Senior Member

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  7. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    Torrent..pretty decent

    uugh..For Sir.Serbia Mr. Ensr Aka Bohemain Basterd MSE etc etc etc.

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    with the super kool coffee stain..and my amazing handy..and my silly gay style.. <_<

  8. dizzle_d

    dizzle_d Senior Member

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    Torrent- that last ones pretty ill, except for the middle part of the E, it kind of hooks downward and makes it look funky. my opinion. and what do you mean by make it flow more, I mean I understand what your saying, but how so?

    Aimo- that is fire, like always, love the style
  9. capitol

    capitol Senior Member

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    I know i suck, but i hgave nothing better to do then upload a bunch of shit pics..and show the world..
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    Ensr:Your Fist e is really weird, And if you dont like a letter(as it seems for you "S") drop it and get a letter you can do fluently.
    Hyve:Im thinkin im alittle bit too toy to say this but you should make all the letters the same size.
  10. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    i aint ENSR...i did it for ENSR.. :rolleyes: ..and you need to do straight up blocks
  11. capo93

    capo93 Senior Member

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    This things banging, love the colors!

    BUT...WTF is it with the teeth... i dont like it at all!!! [/b][/quote]
    i dont mind the teeth the piece is sick and i like the way your style has prgressed i dare say the m is wearker than the rest and i dont like the horns on the e but other than that its fire sick job on the fill as always
  12. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    yeah..actaully..the middle bar structure on the M is weak..Sume..also the U..i dont like how the bottom bar undents upwards..kinda like a W..i always fort that...
    BS is dead tonight

    a full on hardcore hard pressed freestyle !

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  13. Hazex

    Hazex Senior Member

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    looks good but maybe do the a w and m middles bars bigger
  14. AbYSS~>

    AbYSS~> Senior Member

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  15. ESKE one

    ESKE one Senior Member

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    thats great!!! lol j/k but maybe wen you get a littl e better you could come bombing with the crew or something i dont kno no promises

    pen sketch i did in school i fuked up the drop shadow and the O's
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    envoy- im not gonna say shyt to you anymore cuz you dont listen to shyt
    abyss- chill wit all that wak shyt do simples
    amtwo- good shyt i fukes with the 3d

    plz crit everytime i post i always get skipped neva get anycrits plz crit
  16. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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    aimo- 3d's dope, letters are kinda rough though. good concept, just kinda rough execution.

    sumoe- shits fresh. the shark ish is dope. stay up

    envoy- the blue and black one is the best. look at the letter structure guides in the tutorials thread. use the blocks and stay simple.
  17. Pegasus

    Pegasus Senior Member

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    shit sume! that piece is hot but i reckon id be better without the teeth and shit. And GO SIMPLE!!!!!!!
    half arsed alfabet
    might finish
    exchange with psilo
    says talia

    ssorry to dump all this stuff on u but i got my camera fixed
  18. Noddles912300

    Noddles912300 Senior Member

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    Abyss take every ones advice. go simple.
    eske some of the letters are messed up like the B and K. I dont like the extensions either.
  19. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    dude. fucking simples. and bars. do 'em.
  20. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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    abyss- tutorials thread. go much much simpler, keyboard letters.

    eske- shits alright. the M's the best letter. just keep the bars in proportion and keep sketching