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thats not simple bud. just get rid of the extensions and draw it out [Broken External Image]:http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1059/img0945kf9.jpg
that isnt simple ^^ ... do blocks..like..whoa...DEFIANCE that typa shit im out to watch LIVERPOOL .V. CHELSKI CUMON LIVERPOOL !!
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[Broken External Image]:http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/3825/closesketcher7.jpg lil sketch i drew hope u can help [Broken External Image]:http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/8310/closesketch2fd5.jpg another sketch
definitely not my favorite from you...too many arrows, I think, even if most of them are very well placed... also the "E" isn't that great, assuming the letter after the "R" is an "E"
Defiance and Cosmic, go back to real simple letters, honestly copy the letters on your keyboard, nice and close together still, and work on keeping nice straight clean lines, and stay away from colour, when you think youve made progress, post your shit up again, until then, dont. Wilt, keep your letters the same size, lose the extensions on the K, make your whole piece centered, and forget about colour for now Aky, not my fave either, but some of those letters are still banging
defiance, half your piece is taken up by 2 huge arrows. i think you should get a longer name (atleast 3 letters, you'll regret a 2 letter name when your trying to do pieces), and go more simple. cosmic i dont know what you were thinkin with the arrows, but lose em. your piece looks like the tangles mass of wires under my desk, space out the letters and focus on making them actually look like letters not intertwine with the letter next to them.
OH SNAP ONERS... resize the pic.. but I can give you this advice... ur hand is too shaky n stuff... like a giraff!
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that a is nice the s is ugly as hell, dont overlap the letters like that yet e is also ugly, it radiates weakness n the extension on the lower part of the right leg makes it seem off balanced anyywayy judging by that a, you're on the right track keep it up tough tittie
No sketches to crit!!! [Broken External Image]:http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/seazslap.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/1a.jpg What do you guys think??? I like the first one the best...
i cant tell if that says spare or seare, im leaning towards spare so let me say this: the s reminds me of sume's, the p is utter shit, the hole on the a needs to be smaller, it looks like a huge gaping vagina, the r is okay i guess but that hole is crap, the last e is the only good letters i think you havent being using bars... use em! aces the pencil sketch is hot, the others are meh (im borrrrrrredddddddd)