struckture is kinda lacking. the letters seem kinda topheavy/unbalanced. and the 3d is pretty off. don't go simpler, (i mean, it always helps, but you don't necessarily need it) just perfect getting your stuff more balanced and try keeping more even thickness throughout for now.
yo sky 5 youll defenatly be missed around here youve helped me a lot then i was jus starting..... this is a tutorial u did for me way back when... [Broken External Image]:http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8477/1202077bs4.jpg kickflip - i went back and looked at your post . . in my opinion you need to add a lil curve to your letters/bars cuz right now they are pretty much organized straight rectangles (which is where you should start for simples) . . but the next step i guess is to add a lil curve/bend to em . . the first inked VPIK has a lil curve to it so you get the idea . . the bottom ink one is curved but then you can start to stretch your letters horizontally and get crazier with it . . so my origonal advice to go horizontal was wrong, add curve first then go horizontal . . then add addons . . then (this will be a few yers down the road now) youll be doing wildstyles on paper trying to bring your paint skills up to par . . . then (were now atleast 5 years out) youll be GRAFFITI MASTER BLASTER 3000!
looks ok i guess aesone. id say keep with the simples like your doing. sooner or later it will get ya. View attachment 274089 for the battle, crits welcome.
if you feel that way, quit - everybody fucking sucks at some point, dont get hit out by that. it takes years to become good (for most people there's always the few selected who get their flow down in 1 year or smth). you love doing it? keep doing it. you do it to be cool? give it up fast please
ahh. i hate you kids. "zomg, my letters dont got ill mad flow so im gonna quit." swet, your and idiot. quit. im not gonna pretend like im good. or like i know much at all. but you have to fucking stick with it, and if your even thinking about quiting for the stupid reason of "im not good" then quit. bombing science doesnt need you and the rest of the world certainly does not need your graffiti. oh oww, look at that, graffiti i actually called it by the "correct" name. i lost my super cool graff man points. you alwasy have to leave out those last three letters. oops, sorry kids.
haha, wanna see my first stuff? View attachment 274095 i came on this site, i got fuckin smacked down. never fucking stop. ive proved a lot of people here wrong about me. but u know what? ive written this speech so many goddamn times to so many different kids, i dont give a shit anymore. u wanna quit? we dont giva shit. its like that quote, "They say graffiti isn't art, doesnt belong in the galleries. Funny thang is, graffiti dont giva fuck." or some shit like that. haha. fuck sky5, missing u alrdy (-homo)
Hey what up everyone just did a sketch and wondering what should i work on oh and ASB_ONE I think your right i should keep it simple thinks for the tip btw: dont mind the character lol [Broken External Image]:http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/1175/syntry3kz0.jpg
if u can give it up for a year, ur never gonna be real. a true head never stops. u dont wanna paint in ur city for some dumbshit reason, (toy crews? so put them straight, what the fuck is the problem there?) then sketch everyday in ur book twice as much. use ur bbook as a planning book for your first chance to really paint. goddamn u kids piss me off.
the problem here is they wasted all the walls in this city.(mostly only done by one writer who goes by the name ATRANE) Enough of my excuses.
[Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/4121/0705072111kc3.jpg Sketch done today, crits? :blink:
At least he's getting up and not being a lazy ass mofo Believe it or not, I used to use color... I used to suck too. I just felt like going through my old shit and taking flicks of it [Broken External Image]:http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2698/img0742kg9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/3946/img0744jy1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/70/img0743zy5.jpg Ahahahaha, this shit makes me laugh