seize...simples are lookin good, i would get rid of the drip type extensions on the first pic though they dont really fit. bleach...your trying to do to much at once. dont do 3D type stuff yet just work on your basic letters first. rayseone...nice lookin sketch. hard to really crit untill its done. post when its colored. to make the 'n' look better and to keep the flow right try making the n lowercase.imo
bleach how do you double post 10 minutres later haha yeah make the n lowercase and you could make the G more ledgible, connect the top part and make a cutback into the middle so it looks like a G not a C
simple throws. fucked up shading on the bottom one [Broken External Image]:http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3286/throwsie2.jpg
Nickstix/Rayseone- Yeah I'm definitely going to make the n lowercase, that would make it alot easier. Also, I'll try and make the G more legible, thanks guys.
mister 213 - basically what borg said, also just a lil sloppy, but that can easily be fixed havent posted in a while heres an outline, that im not yet done outlining, kinda sloppy too critiques? [Broken External Image]:http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/5440/0525070003dm0.jpg
mister 215- that throw has a lot of potential in my opinon, keeping working with it an tweeking it for a w hile an u may be on to something good. nasrone- both are clean an crisp but myself like the bottom one better note- its cool, good how its pretty crazy but you didnt get super crazy witht he letters which is good
note dont lissen to any of those toys, they dont know wat there on about, its fucking ugly, lose all the extentions and arrows and use simple letteres made from bars
[Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9789/1026zn2.jpg some new shit im working on its more hmm abstract i suppose [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8277/1029pj5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3672/lahza003bx7.jpg so watchya thinks they need work but i dnt have the time to spend time on them so the finish aint to good.
sketch its really not that bad note- just lose the extensions and change that's S don't make the top of the s go across the middle bar of the s like that *barf* ya dig?
the only thing i would keep is the a, the rest is horrible, matbe i was a lil harsh but it was only to counter all the egobossting he was getting, the worst thing a toys need is another toy telling them theyer stuff is good, got to br crule to be kind
your kinda right but there's no reason for him to go all the way back to simples just chill where the a is at and develop your style from there throw away your s and e and make new little simpler s and e using bars ya feel me?
dont really know how to crit that, ur shadeins fine, and u obviously wernt going for perfect proprtions, but i like it