Edward - Looks good, I'd ditch the hand though because I couldnt tell if it was a K or a Y. Shitty picture from my phone. Crits please?
I thought it was a broom, Fuck. Still a good simple. Canvas for my girl...I was going to put her last name under the L but decided against it, hence it being up. Writers block just some shit.
i swear evryone these days thinks they can do a fuckin canvas and they all got the same fucking concept splattered paint, please don't ruin any more fuckin canvases. chop- go simpler i cant make out any letters except an N. please go simpler. rayse one- you have come along nicely, thats a pretty nice freestyle. Lose alot of those random bars though they make the piece not flow as well.
dope simples sezer. donno about the thing on the k tho ras - looks good, i agree with sume tho that you should work on your letters more. instead because your peice is not the focal point of the sketch. good work none the less zepo - i likwe the background not so much the peice. it seems forced. chop logic - lose the stuff around the peice. pen freestyle from school. the R didnt fit though. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/201/seyarrrbs9.jpg
yo rayseone i like it, add some 3d. heres some new stuff, feedback and crits please! View attachment 279034 View attachment 279035
Bump Sezer, blow me. I'll do what I want. Rayes move the bottom bar of the S farther out, it'll balance it with the wider A. And watch some of those extensions, looking a little out of place: left side of A top of S and top right of E.
Bump Sezer, blow me. I'll do what I want. Rayes move the bottom bar of the S farther out, it'll balance it with the wider A. And watch some of those extensions, looking a little out of place: left side of A top of S and top right of E. [/b][/quote] watch your mouth hoe ass ****. talk is cheap, battle?
rays -- haven't really been a fan of your addons, but in particular I don't like these. letters lookin alright though. also, ever heard of an extra sheet of paper? zep0 -- canvas - personally I'm just sticking to paper until I get better. waste of materials until I get my work looking real good. the letters themselves, I don't like the addon on the bottomright of the K and E, and the negative space under the L makes it look out of place. underneath the dot of the I looks weird to me too. as for the 3D: I really really hate the black line shit unless it's done properly or rather, a certain way. they don't line up so it looks off. 1st sketch - the "one" under the E looks meh. don't like the S. dropshadow is also off in places. 2nd sketch - needs tweaking. bend in the bottom of the E looks out of place. DM -- all around, make your stuff consistent. learn letter structure by building your letters from bars. chop logic -- is it supposed to say "ink"? whatever it is, simplify. aaaand a flick, not the usual, all pencil: [Broken External Image]:http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/1636/photo0001ds1.jpg topleft of the S doesn't follow the other letters, U could be changed so it doesn't have that big empty space in the middle of it. EDIT: oh yeah a craptacular thing I did like a week and a half ago. badtacular indeed. [Broken External Image]:http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4070/photo00011fg9.jpg
and sometimes they like to use hotdogs for H's old sheeeeet no homo drunk shit old name mad angry old garbage the throw sucks? i just love the R [/b][/quote] bumping for balls on chin.