Made - like the color scheme. the fill is a bit funky...scatterd a bit. work on your letters a bit, you'll get better Sate 2 - ...Your 3d's all fucked up, Angels on the A and T are all different, lose the extensions on the bottom of your T, and find something else to color with. looks like Sharpie or some walmart brand. Just stick with pencils or pens and keep it simple. dont worry about colours and fills right now. Ok, i get it, my last one was wack, just another experiment, heres some i did about a week ago, tell me what you think. [Broken External Image]:http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/2769/scan002001te8.jpg No More...just did it in my freetime, means nothing [Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/129/scan001002qo1.jpg Another one i did about a week ago. Crits?
a shot at a new peice after taking some advice from CHALK... [Broken External Image]:http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4204/keene007gs9.jpg
I just deleted a couple pages of pointless talk...about RAS. I don't care if you don't like him and no one cares, just shut the fuck up please, you guys are ruining the Tot Black Book Thread...If the post isn't a flick or a crit, it's getting deleted and I'm gonna take your posting rights away for a day or two.
Ok but can i ask a question? why is it called tot blackbooks and not toy blackbooks? Edit: Sume-probably because it was a typo.
Thanks sume. Revolt.....does it matter? Silly - Like the Leaks throw up on the bottom. on the simple above it, dont angel your letters like that, keep em upright. Ayte- Like your A, not so much the others. nice simple though People skippin' me....!?....UP^^^
bump for crit aces: lose the arrows and the C is kind of hidden, other than that i think it's ok ayte: the E looks a bit too big and doesn't fit with the other letters in my opinion, i like the A and T though selfish: nice simple
whats a typo ?..uugh :blink: .. Lek...i like...just that R leg bugging me.. Glas..looks nice...simple..but that G looks like DG's G...but then again..its pretty generic.. Silyl Selfish...damn..i like that simple ! ... keep it up.. Ayte you cookies....im liking that A....not to much the T..but still...keep it up.. a quick freestyle for Tare...sorry abouut teh R... View attachment 279137
Yes it does matter to me, its been bugging me for ages.... sate - Holy moly!!! screw that up, chuck it in the bin, burn it, whatever i dont care but please start off simple. Use bars as shown in the new to graff thread. aces - I like it but get rid of those arrows, make that shit look ugly!!! and the first one reminds me of cezr's style ayte - I like that one alot, keep using them bars. leah - I like that bottom throw, with a little bit of work it'll be nice. glas - It's nice, now make them letters your own !! peace
what i do in school. fuck outlines mad sloppy mad gross AND THIS IS FOR MY CUTE ANIMAL LOVING BBY ATESK!
Sex that filled in one looks kinda sweet. Wouldn't use it all the time, but once in awhile as a change it's cool.
Just finished this a sec ago. Crits? View attachment 279153 Ras- the A is nice mannn sex- your stuff is soo nice i love it.
the ras beef is getting old...can it sex without the condoms and with the grime time, fresh throws meant purely for destroying, im down lol 00-made, space the letters out more homie, and they dont all have to be in the exact same shape, looks kinda strange bawksy got bored as all hell in history class and only had two red pens [Broken External Image]:http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/4823/bawkredbp0.jpg
Sex - god damn that is a lot of pictures Made - that looks a lot better then your last one. like the 3d, maybe a more visible colour for your outline. Badass though