i know but i dont know what to do... should i ad 3d or shadow? or smear the cheese in my sammich all over it?
i say just smear ur sammwich cheese on it ha... nah i say just shadow it up i think itd look best crits plz
bazer- i disagree. i say inward 3d, theres too much white space for shadow. and btw i love that last "ER". vile- i like it but i think you should lose the arrows, and why are there no cracks on the c or a?
i think you need to tone it down a lil bit dude. dont do backgrounds just yet. make your letters a little thicker but all the same size. and as for people that r gonna tell you to go simple, dont follow them just because its what the majority of the writers are saying. do what your doin but if it sucks flood yourself around more graff but dont bite just get inspired.
antic - maybe just focus on letters? bouncing - the lower arm looks a bit weird baze - 3d! but a vp at the top maybe? some simples [Broken External Image]:http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/DSC00108.jpg
Baze - THATS AWSOME!!!!!!! can't wait to c it with some color Bouncingsoul - How do u do it i could never pull that shit off with a pen View attachment 284022 View attachment 284023 View attachment 284024 crits?
hazex-the e is the only letter i really like just keep workin on them baze- i think 3d would look pretty good vile-make all ur letters the same size dont worry bout fill bouncingsoul-so nice as usual sewr- pushem together more sinn- i like the top and bottom [Broken External Image]:http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/450/nasr9og3.jpg over did the bubbles. crits
well, regardless it was still good, esp for being 17. im only 15 but i saw this guy at a local art show who was just so fucking amazing, like it was fantasy, abstractm hiphopish, ahh it was tight. so anyways, im taking painting classes. as soon as i find a free or cheap place for them.
Nasr - I like the the n,a and r but not sure about the s Sinn - I like the top and the bottom one nice style and color Bounce - I like that freak it looks crazy btw iv been wanting to ask a question but couldn't start a thread for some reason (kept on getting some msg) so if u have an answer pls just msg me so this thread wont be filled with off topic discussion k the question is how many of you have taken art class or are taking and is it necessary to get better if not how did u learn , with tuts or what? I know its a stupid question but iv had it on my mind for a while know, and i havnt taken any classes Thx in advance =) Quick Sketch Tell me what u think [Broken External Image]:http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/4618/syntry3sj2.jpg
syn it's aight, i don't like that weird square in your 'y'. work on getting less sketchy lines, it'll help out when you go to ink something. naser, work on getting the edges of the letters straight for now. If you really must have rounded corners, make the letters completely straight with sharp corners, and then go through afterward and round 'em out. So this year I did a bunch of simple 5 minute sketches, a couple i might have shown already. I think I'ma post one a day 'till I run out. here's the first [Broken External Image]:http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/7500/shitzv3.jpg also, I'm finnaly gonna color this tomarrow, hopefully in addition to an exchange. [Broken External Image]:http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/5561/sharpsquaressj5.jpg It's about time I do some sketches, I've been working only on handies and throwies for the past month or two.
that last one is sick, u down for tha excange still? i dropped a quick pen freestyle 5 mins ago but i'll do a new one for the exchange
Captain; that last one is real dank. That thick black outline makes it pop so nice. Letters are sick.
Bomb. Before fill and details all the lil lines and stuff will flow once i finish...theres wind coming from two diff directions on each side hits the letters ext. im pretty happy about it...specially the letters...extentions..w.e im a toy...but i like it...crits... also idk im horrible with color flow so help on that as well? The top handy whichh i went with the wind idea as well...looks bleh but o well.. it says.. "Be blown away i drop bombs all day" haha yeah. anyways it was fun so crits and help! [Broken External Image]:http://aycu06.webshots.com/image/19205/2003695942796169179_rs.jpg
Dusk; I'm not a big fan of those little wind things. haha. I don't really like the things above the letters... I don't know what to call them. The letters are good though. Keep it up.