D_G- I was actually thinking the same thing, i fugged up on the N definitely, sick throw though man what's it say? Dizzle- It's actually very nice, but the thing is it's just begging to be squished together more, the shape and the conture of the letters would flow really nicely if there was less space between the E R and K. Genetic- I like that it's out there and creative, but it's hardly legible and it just seems as if you kind of made the letters too foreign, maybe simples? ShAmEE- Sick man, lovin the colors and the fill AMK- I would hardly call it rave, more positive encouragement?
Sheep..i just think we need Alive or Tricks to come in and give you some proper encouragement...coz encougament dont make you get better...harsh critisizm does
well last time tricks came in and told me wu tang would slam my arm in a door if they saw my piece, besides your right here, why not give me some harsh criticism, im a good sport man. i know im not very good, hell it's my 3rd week of this graff stuff, so I'm willing to take any advice i can get
well..ill give you the advice they gave me.. get a pencil.. sketch out simples block letters uysing BARS
your n reminds me of my n in my valen peice.. not saying its a bite, just saying.. View attachment 284073
I personally like my "e", I don't like my "R" either but w.e. and nah, I didn't bite it. lol I just took the left leg, kicked it in, and then bent the other bars to fit with that other bar. eh. w.e. and amk, if you're saying it is unfair that I post in there, I've been posting in there for a while, so idk. Just post in there, most of the time people don't say anything or it gets deleted. Anyways I'm supposed to be taking a break from BS so laterrrrrr. edit: Baze-not feelin the "E" or "A" in the "VALEN" piece...idk your bars are a lil' shaky and the arrows shouldn't be where you put them...just thought I'd crit it since you posted it.
well to be honest telling me to sketch simples doesnt really do anything for me, i sketch simples alot trust me, but i just like to try and be "fresh", of course thats no excuse for horrible letter structure. Anyway, heres some shit i jus finished: Typical Cats, listen to em [Broken External Image]:http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/7288/dsc00026rf5.jpg Grave Diggas, again, listen to em [Broken External Image]:http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/9980/dsc00022oh6.jpg Shaded Wu Tang (Yes the U and the N suck) [Broken External Image]:http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/2616/dsc00025sh1.jpg And of course a simple [Broken External Image]:http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/1417/dsc00024ob7.jpg
it so fair you post in there..and thanks man and Sheep..the effect of simples you dont see untill about 2 - 3motnhs of doint them
[Broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/061907_11381.jpg throwie ive been workin on. i know the shading on them is a bit fucked. but yeah. crits? edit: i also kinda dislike the I but i dunno what else to do. ideas?
I say fatten her up a bit, looks anorexic, the V also kind of looks too much like a U, as for the I, just ditch that line for now a straight bar looks better than that
Sheep- The 'e' is gettin covered by the 'v' a little too much. I like what you're doing. Just when your doing it focus more on structure before you do the add ons. Correct the spacing of your letters, balancing the piece, and like I said, structure. Try that and you'll get a cleaner look overall.
yeah i was worried about the E, will do though man thanks and AMK, why not offer crits instead of disses and snide remarks? just a thought
amk. i told you i wasnt good. i flat out explained that i wasnt that good at all. why did you expect better than what i explained? edit: oh and ive just been workin on that since last night so cut me some slack.