final piece.
im ok with it. but i have that letter style down so im axcenious to draw another one out.

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vice, I don't really like how they all come to a point, it just doesnt' seem right to me.

dusk... I'm speechless. Better than pegasus at least.

fucked up on the letter fill, plus it's all kind unclean.

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i had meant for it to come out more like this:
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wisp: i like the second one, but the P seems a bit smaller than the other letters

anyway, any crits of this? i think i bit somebody with the A in it but idk if i really did or not. just looked too familiar after i took a look when i was done.

edit: it was done pretty quick so please don't mind the sloppiness

 

The 'a' probably looks worst of all the letters. But your getting better with bars. S and L are okay the G and A are what really need work.



Just finished this. Any good?

 

Wisp; that second one is hotttttt. Did you use crayons to color? I like the color on the background of the first... I don't think I like the blue fill on the letters. It's still real nice regardless.

 

Glass: bring your letters closer together or fatten em up a bit & it'll look good.

 

colored pencils are where it's at. That second one is old, and I fucked up the fill in the first one, so I just went over it with the one color.

 

hey, heres a sketch i did yesteryay tell me what i am doing wrong and right please

 

hahahahahaah

 

Your writing king

 

hahahaha.

 

yeah thats one thing out of a million..

 

yeah, changing now is out of the question
do you have anything to say about my sketches, or are you going to be a hardass in the sketch thread too?

p.s. wisp i really like your second 1

 

Why, 'cause your 'up'? so..i was 'up' with my old name's but i've changed my name loads. Just change it will ya'

 

I'm not pleased with the writing around it... bit I like the rest of it. Critttterz plzzzzzzzzz.

 

alright, just for you revolt
but could you at least do two things?
1. crit my sketch
2. give me ideas on names

 

Ok, get your favourite letters and make a name out of them.

and you need to start using bars, look in the new to graff thread

 

yo king, everyone here can be a hard ass, but you know what? that's what's so damn helpful about everybody here.

 

im definetly keeping this name on the forums though