you will notice that if you're gonna use top bar on the k like an upward thingie without the < in it (k like that and not like a straight bar on top of the bottom bar) that it should be alot closer to the main bar) very cryptic explanation, damn i miss a termology for letters
good job to everyone on this page so far! keep it up ^_^ [Broken External Image]:http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/193/pic1107dt7.jpg
jers- that shits looking real fresh man, nice coloring stim- lookin good, take away the lines at the bottom of the lettering though droppin this piece for baze [Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/75/scan0004hl5.jpg
Thanks for the crits guys. very clean borg, reminds me of that guy trashes work as far as cleanliness goes. Sloppy ADD at work [Broken External Image]:http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/4685/pic1109ea9.jpg
There already is a SAME anteup... [Broken External Image]:http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b346/madeone/enuf010.jpg
View attachment 285457 think im gunna try a new trend here see if it catches. if u want to bumb your shit. cool, but bump somone elses shit too. something u like pages back that might have been overlooked or that u just feel. what yall think, deal? kinda a way to give props to another writer and get some crits at the same time. just try not to bump something on the same page. take it back and look and see if u can actually help some shit instaid of lookin selfish only bumpin your own shit. sezer im really feelin this. i think your letters are progressing well.
yo asek, that shit fube bumped...thats hott, would make a tight ashell hollow simple next time your painting
that was an exchange of sorts by sezer. EsKoNeR!!- if u were going for semitry your off a bit. me personaly i dont like the extentions eather. draw it again?
naw, not going for as symetric as many of mine have been in the past, the only symetry i wanted was for the two arrows and the two thin things on either ends to be comming off at the same spot.
eskoner...looks good to me, the new should be sick fube...that throw is really nice stim...the letters are too squished together borg...thats so clean, good letters and good color i havent been sketchin much lately and finally did today... View attachment 285472 ^war battle piece, not too happy with the outcome but i have no time to do another View attachment 285473 ^and an old one 'RET' that i really like crits?
if you like that style then you should run it for a while. do it over and every time you do a new one change it up a little bit: the location, direction or your arrows, the way your letters are shaped and different ways of doing the 3d. im sure there's other stuff you can change but those are just some basics. For you guys that like going on vandalsquad.com: im hosting bi weekly battles that you do on there so check the battle callouts and rules.
fube - i bumped your piece but i guess it got deleted so watever really like your style though nickstix- your progressing nicely keep sketching here something of mine nice and simple
eske the curved bar on the s the right line of it is shakey and isnt rele flowing with the left line but the P R E are good
shits really nice borg, only thing i dont like is the e for some weird reason.. looks to small..idk mayb just me o yea and it only has one green highlight and the rest of the letters have more, i would change that
pres :try makin your letters the same fattness bazer :it looks good but you should have made your E liek your a but it stilll looks good and pry would have changed much anyways. top one is too dark and the 2nd the flash kinda messed soe of it up but you guys get the idea. could i get some crits?