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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    uhhhhhhhhhh thats hot. and yes, u get extra h's for iy being so nice

    and drak, right now it looks like a bad h, u need to make the top right leg diagonal, like this /
     
  2. bountyhunter113

    bountyhunter113 Elite Member

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    huge improvement since i last saw ur stuff bro! keep going in this direction ,also sweet handstyle
    but major work on the "K" as said
     
  3. siZo

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  4. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    nah dont. your letters look like you couldn't decide what you wnated it to look like. on the w half is roundish and half had a more solid shape to it.



    some bullshit.. this thread is moving kinda slow today.
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  5. siZo

    siZo Member

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    if i straightened it up so its all edges.. ??
     
  6. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    make the rest of the letter like the right side or the left side of the W. however you prefer.
     
  7. The_Sheep

    The_Sheep Senior Member

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    Beef up the D please, make the R smaller and move the extended bar more in the empty space looks horrid, beef up the A slightly, and fix ur K by slanting the bars in different directions than the main bars, looks like a cracked out H, and all the skinny bars you have, beef them up ever so slightly, idk it might be hard to understand my post, its easier to show you than try to explain it in words, but yeah redo it trust me itll be worth it
     
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  8. tesfortis

    tesfortis Senior Member

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    Drak; you're getting better with every sketch. Just add some 3-d to it to beef it up.
     
  9. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    drak, i think you should separate the left bar of the A into two straighter bars, but still bending the left half of the A the same direction. if you get what i mean by that.

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    just seems like it would fit into everything better.
     
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  10. Ginsu

    Ginsu Senior Member

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    ai203.photobucket.com_albums_aa305_Zen_master_flex_osa.jpg
    srry bout the size did this weeks ago
    opte one i like ur full page looks sick
    this one is LACRIM and OSAH as me tag
     
  11. scoot

    scoot Elite Member

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    drak- make ur K look more like one right now its more similar to a H
    snorky- work on ur R and S a lil more man their not proportionate

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    fucked up on the 3-d... really bad
     
  12. enigmatic

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  13. mattFOO

    mattFOO Senior Member

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  14. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    Matt... dont try to do anything crazy with effects and shit just do simples for now
     
  15. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    the third one down is along the right path. "letters first" indeed. back burner all your other shit, and get your letters down first.
     
  16. Vice

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  17. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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  18. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    Should I color this or "go simpler". I know the N is fucking wack, and the G isn't too good either.
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    Stak your letter are simple, but the A is wack and doesnt go with em. Try squaring it off on the top like the other letters and actually using a middle bar. Youre on the right track son.

    Mattfoo- i hate saying this, but do simples. with the right colors and 3d, simples can make dope pieces.

    Enigmatic- the top one has a good concept going but work on yur letters and lose the top connection.

    scoot- i dont really like that G. the pointy spots kill it.

    Ginsu- It looks good as a whole but where are the letters?

    Drakula- That D is dope, dont like the A, the rest are fine.

    uhhh- Dope.
     
  19. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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  20. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    No, it's just that I have heard him say he's been arrested and shit, and he was saying he was pretty good before if I remember correctly...