Bumping all this shit. good idea fube. ^^^^ Had to bump it's d_g's woman. Nice simples work on the middle of the A though. ^^^^ Good shit hester nice euro style now all you need to do is some easter egg fills. ^^^^ God damn. ^^^^ keep playing with your letters borg your coming around nicely now that you decided to stick to one style. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- My turn.
here guys critique this one.. its when all of the tags and shit on it are so horrible.. but tell me what you guys think
ENeS one- go simpler. end of story block letetrs look at the ESKA piece in my last post do shit like that. Because this just looks like some jumbled pipes.
enes - it just looks like spagetti on a plate lol listen to sezr go simpler sezer -feeling the character on the demise sketch , that rip waster peice is ill too, the E looks kinda out of place tho dunno why maybe cuz thw top part overlaps morn - nice n clean man good work, maybe just lose the random extension from bottom of the O silent vandal - i dunno imknda not a fan of euroish styles so i cant say i like it, but do what you like its for you, maybe just fix the R tho
geometry aye? what did i just say simpler. ase- the letters are nice without the extensions keep that shit up.
hungr: your style is so dope. and yeah i believe you did kill it with the circles. still nice though. BORG: so dope, tht green outline made it just fucking pop. but i would put an extension on the bottom left of your o. ENES.ONE: go simpler to cluttered. just dont flow. new character still in its fucking with it mode. just the basic idea. critz please.
shit i got a lot to crit to not get beat down by mods hmm enes-(graph paper piece) pretty good, sorta weird lookin with all the weird add ins, still like it NOTE- dont like the thing on the a so mch, still a dope piece Borg- so clean, dont like letters mch tho, too many extensions for me sezr- dope, not mch for me to say tech- nice coloring and everything, letters are a little weird heres one i did for tech View attachment 286303 edit: please note my cool circoit board effect
kelio are the things on the far left and far right hands or teeth? geks maybe you overkilled with the techy lines? enes the 3d is messed up ase on the left top of the a maybe make it bend the opposite to the right? crits/tips? [Broken External Image]:http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z192/sewr11/File0076.jpg
the bottom extension on the s is kinda weird, i woold change it so it matches the c, c's and e's are basically shaped the same. besides that i like all of this kelio- idk, keep workin on it. its not really bad right now, its jst sort of sittin there. maybe draw it doin somethin or in a different pose. make it exciting
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not really feelin any of it cept the 3d on the last piece go simpler, there isnt a lot of letter strctre in those pieces
borg-shits progressin by each sketch not much to crit that i see tech- feelin it but id make the h a lil bigger edward- last ones my favorite nice simples enes-you prolly dont wanna here this but i say go simple and dont worry bout fills or details yet worry bout letters hester- nice shit love euro geks- not a fan of the "circuit board fill" tryin different style...[Broken External Image]:http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9924/nasr45646ve5.jpg crits..
WTF HOW CAN YOO NOT LIKE THE CIRCOIT BOARD FILL lol jp hmm fix that n and its weird bmps they are not good i woold close the a, looks fnny, bt thast jst me work on the r, i dont really kno how to explain it bt that r is weak
bump for more crits and tips on how to improve please the eska simple is nice the sticker looks real fresh i like the s