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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    *edit*directed at sou- im definitely gonna see it if a guy who can do THAT says its good.

    but i was looking for something to crit....nothin.

    your 3d is immaculate (i use big words when im impressed)

    fluffy- i like it. u should add some shadow or 3d, and a keyline. im a sucker for that kinda style though

    GOD DAMN! EDIT AGAIN! i jut noticed the keyline. personally id make it a brighter pink (and add some imward 3d or some shadow)
     
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  2. Ez3kieL

    Ez3kieL Senior Member

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    Chalk-looks good, clean shit
    Jroc- seems like you got the shakes with those straight lines, probably from taking too long and pressing too hard while drawing straight lines.
    Noneofthisisreal- having your D not connected makes it seem not like a D...
    Wing-ditch those scrawny arrows, your better off without them.
    Sekt-looks like your wheels are smaller in comparison to the car itself.
    SouMvd-digging that flora style you got, get that shit colored.
    Fluffy Buns-not feeling the M, other than that it looks simple enough.

    old to new-(now)
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    SLOPPY...
     
  3. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    ^^
    Ionly like the one pen freestyle one with black pen. the rest like you were trying too hard.

    a sticker I made for someone

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  4. SLEDGEHAMMER

    SLEDGEHAMMER Senior Member

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    Crits off someone decent please :), someone better than me, thanks.
     
  5. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    asen - yah thts nice cant wait to see it coloured, not to sure bout the litte extentions under the a and the n tho other than tht its hot.
     
  6. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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  7. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  8. beastie_1989

    beastie_1989 Senior Member

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  9. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Fluffy Bunnis..i dont get it...like...why do you always draw at the bottom of the page...?...the letters are pretty whack too..

    Beastie...your stuff is like how my shit used to be ages ago...i suggest blocks...but you probably wont do them so whats the point..

    Zerz...looks aight...throw i dark colour so we can see those letters

    Also...why did my bump of Hungr's peice get deleted..?
     
  10. hungr

    hungr Senior Member

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    beastie the EAST is pretty fresh, maybe make the T a bit smaller.. the other one not so much

    since they took away the bumpage by amk i post stickers for china
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  11. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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  12. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    make ur n middle bar more diagonal so it looks less like an h
     
  13. Silly Selfish

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  14. Mike.

    Mike. Senior Member

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  15. revolt92

    revolt92 Banned

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    Please give crits before asking for them.

    borg - simply fresh man, keep it up.

    wha happen - I love your throwies, how do you do it? just keep that shit up man.

    beast - You have a very distinctive style, and i like it, but i don't like that t in the first sketch.

    hungr - On the yellow sticker, i don't like your h..look kinda odd

    sketch - i actually quite like those simples, keep working on them.

    elka - The a is the only decent letter in the first sketch in my opinion, and sorry but that throw sucks.

    free - it's ok for a staring point, but i think free is a stupid name...but it's your choice.
     
  16. Mr Tasty

    Mr Tasty Banned

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    msnpaint quickie
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    crits?
     
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  17. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Dope shit hungr...
     
  18. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    MIKE

    no mate..
    like this..

    do those shitty boring simples for a few months..
    YES IT SOUNDS DAUNTING..
    but..
    itll help yah trust me..
    coz it did me..
    and most of the people who actually did them in here it helped them too..

    after you have the go ahead from one of us guys...
    that you do have simples down..
    ( Uuuh was the guy who told me that...it was pure love )
    theen..
    you can start getting creative..
    and not wasting your creativness..
    on sumthing that looks shitty..

    so all this boring basic shit..
    will pay off..when you have dope ass letters...
    aiiight
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    REMEBER TO USE BARS ALSO..TO CONSTRUCT YOUR LETTERS...GO TO THE NEW 2 GRAFF THREAD...THERE IS SOME GOOD TUTORIALS THERE ON HOW TO DO IT..

    and if you look at writers..who are half way thru a peice..you can see the bars theyve constructed..

    like this...

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    can you see the bars..
    make your letters look like that
    also..forget colouring...
    you wann be rocking these in simple black and white..

    hope i helped..and i hope you understood..
     
  19. revolt92

    revolt92 Banned

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  20. Guillermo João Rodriguez

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