DRAK, YOU FINALLY FINISHED! that looks nice, and i love that character. its like out of monsters inc. hahaha can you see my pic at the top of the page or is it fucked up?
me and morn dont live close to each other and we wouldnt of even known each other existed so nah PS. yeah i just realized how bad that looks
the pic wasnt workin before so try 2... [Broken External Image]:http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i893442_pencilsketch.jpg critz?
jers i like the colors but i dont like the character i guess its more of a personal thing drak try to keep your letters the same size they float up a little at the end but other than that it looks great [Broken External Image]:http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/tr4sh3d4ndsc4ttered/bank001.jpg crits?
lol sorry about the brackets... the piece says SA but in the middle in the littel writing i put AG because i write SAGA ( S ag A) understand?? ..lol
one of my fav's from class today. the fill is with a highlighter lol. View attachment 289117 really? I don't think anyone else writes it around these parts, but what if I changed to dakr?
you have nice letters but the way you position the A and the K off the R is a little whack, make it level at the bottom dont make the K randomly come up and try and make those arrows a little more logical not just out of nowhere
giganticcrane- go waaay simpler man.. trust i know everyone says it but it helps soo much..start wit bars and work ur way up to more curves and shit.. some more shit i just finished.. just some random pen freestyle.. im tryin a bit of new style.. (SAGA) CRITS???
i like the main one a lot, and now i get what you were saying about the other one (heh, my bad), but the tag and other thing near the bottom or pretty bad. and i think its pretty clear that i used bars and the extensions (at least most of them, lol) werent completely pulled out the ass, if you look. but i sort of see what your saying, i guess. i mean, i used bars and that isnt that complex besides a few of the more random extensions so i'm having trouble taking that advice anywhere..
ye its mostly the extentions and just the way the letters and placed.. and ya the tag is wak cuzz i didnt do it..lol..one of my buddies did.. hes pretty toy..lol.. but the throw it mine
lol, im not feeling the throwie either but it looks like your just doodling so im not gonna judge. what you think of this? (old simple) [Broken External Image]:http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i893663_blocks.jpg and another... it isnt really slanted i scanned it bad.. [Broken External Image]:http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i893667_round.jpg
soof, go simple its a bitch but ur letter structure isnt prime new simple pen freestyle random character critz?
[Broken External Image]:http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i893971_newsyle.jpg new idea, just came to me critz?
amk - @ the foot piece thingie. put a sleeve as the extention on the a with a hand making a pointy finger downwards and rest of hand closed or smth maybe?