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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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  2. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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  4. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    uhm, mods.
    where are youuuu?
     
  5. tonentink

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  6. Hunger-im now a fan of you work, i have awalys liked it but now...i look forward to you stuff man...good job and keep it up!
     
  7. Dusk07

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  8. NoneOfThisIsReal

    NoneOfThisIsReal Senior Member

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    Dusk07: I like both of them, but on the second one the D doesn't feel right. Maybe don't make the bottom-left of the D's leg go so far up?

    A work in progress. I've been preparing for a road trip the last couple of days, so I've been sketching here-and-there for like 3 minutes at a time. I'm thinking I should make the N more like the V? And I have writer's block as far as the E goes ... seeing as I haven't drawn it yet. And that swoosh thing is something I've seen a ton of local writers use, thought I might try it out (on paper, anyways)

    Anyways, crits?
    [Broken External Image]:http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1213/0713072040st2.jpg
     
  9. bloodlandmoney

    bloodlandmoney Senior Member

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    wow... i think you need to take a little more time in your peices, you can really tell you only took 3 minitues . BUT the letter structure is ok nothing new
     
  10. capo93

    capo93 Senior Member

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    ai148.photobucket.com_albums_s7_mek2_2007_DSC02386.jpg
    ughh first post of a sketch in a while says mek...
    dusk- seems pretty simple but i would use bars still there are certain parts of your letters that dont really work out?
    scare- looks good but i dont like the way the s overlaps your c and i agree with the thing on the leg of your r but its a good start
    sinn- keep working on that it could end up reallllllllllllllllllly dope
     
  11. HuntingLOLs

    HuntingLOLs Senior Member

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    nah, the charac is like some futurama shizzle, matt groening or whatever...if you wanna do 3d the charac is placed realle bad as it is - your D, imo, has to little space compared to the R and A (mostly the R dominates), thats always one of the harder things to get flowing imo - spaces and letters.
    anyway, some sketches:
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  13. NoneOfThisIsReal

    NoneOfThisIsReal Senior Member

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    "A work in progress" = I know it's messy, and I'll clean it up after I actually draw the last letter.
     
  14. Drakula

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    HLOLS-Thanks for the crit.I like the second one alot.Just forget the background for now though and just do black and white stuff.
    Capo-Looks like a nice euro style from what I can see at this stage.
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    Very sketchy.I think I made teh R smaller this time but I fucked up the arrow on it.

    edit:I do the same piece over and over as eventually as it'll evolve.You just have to keep tweaking it over and over to get a good solid flow and letter style.
     
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  15. Phobia-oner

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  16. N.O.T.E

    N.O.T.E Senior Member

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    gong nice shit keep it up, draks overall its ight, im just not feeling that space between the R and A, i dunno its probably just me

    new style im workin on
    ai193.photobucket.com_albums_z230_ase_9_Untitled_1.jpg_4039e3e2e743a5a2300aa9befedd4672.jpg
     
  17. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Gay arrows/add-ons.
     
  18. BLTZ

    BLTZ Senior Member

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    ok lets try this again
    Im thinking about adding a header(Welcome 2 Salem)
    aimg33.picoodle.com_img_img33_9_7_14_t_welcolm2salm_8ddf95c.png
    did that work
    crits.
     
  19. Jroc1993

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    yeah it worked but i dont know what to say about it, i cant tell if it has structure or not but i like jesus
     
  20. SOOF

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    BLTZ - concentrate more on your letter focus for now, get a decent style down then start adding the fun shit.