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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    ya it worked but it is small as fuck, watever tho, from what i can see you need to just use letters instead of characters man, Graff is about letters. use bars to construct them

    on the other hand hungr dope shit man i look forward to everyone of your posts, drak its pretty good but it looks so fucking awkward cuz the right leg of your k is always up super high so it knocks the piece off balance. ase listen to sume, people that are doing simples, keep doing em, youu will proggress.

    and i have writers block, and its a bitch. so just an outline, critique before i ink if i do?there is another part to the R just on a seperate page
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  2. BLTZ

    BLTZ Senior Member

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    Its not jesus its a witch(welcome 2 Salem) Salem witch trials.
    Well I guess its not good enough since you mistaked a witch for Jesus LOL

    BTW if you think it is too small then click on the pic(it is a link to imageshack with a larger picture)
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  3. Phobia-oner

    Phobia-oner Member

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    seems like whenever i post, it always goes to the next page
  4. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    your stuff shows how bars simple bars can be way sick.

    every letter is done beautifully in my opinion. go for some extensions bra!

    edit: directed to seyar
  5. SOOF

    SOOF Senior Member

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    seyar - nice shit man.
  6. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    verse - imo the bottom one is the best, just the S is a lil big. keep doing stuff like the bottom one, then when they start to look dope, or just well proportioned and stuff, start experimenting with slanting them, moving them closer together, bending a few bars. etc

    and thanks
  7. Tomb-905

    Tomb-905 New Member

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  8. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    your really progressing fast man...but every time you progress that more...your style gets more need to put in there sumthing that you love make it yours and not unoriginal..think of sumthing that noone really does often...coz i think this is leading to a basic wildstyle...which i hate....but if you like wild..then keep on at it man...but just add the originality factor of whatever you want..whetther it be a crazy fill...or different shaped extension...just so someone remebers you by that i mean..they look at your sketch and automatically think DRAK ! ..yah know...keep it up tho:p

    isit me...or isit that hardly anyone is postin in here anymore..?
  9. cel...

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  10. capo93

    capo93 Senior Member

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    ahh bump for more crits only got one...
    drak- i love that micky mouse but i agree that everytime you progress it gets more and more unoriginal not that your bad just try to branch out a bit more
    tomb- lose the extensions and focus on the letters for right now... extensions will come alot easier once you know your letters
    verse-nice and simple keep your letters the same size
    BLTZ- no clue wtf it says.. or is? same for you NOTE
  11. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    capo- i cant really see the pic tht well , but it looks ok.
    Drak- you are improveing pretty rapid but there allstarting to look the same, the character is ok tho.
    tomb- give out some crits then people will crit you.
    some sketches, gong and tdg.
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  12. shax44

    shax44 Senior Member

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    made, don't make that line in the g so fat, i don't like that

    just try a different style, start all over again. this style doen't work for a G.
    i know it's fucked when you have to start all over again, but just do it.
    and G looks better than g i think (in a different style)
  13. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    i dont need to start again trustt mee.
    its in pen so if i fuck it up, i cant go back on when i gt a decent pen toink with ill put up some better pics.
  14. daisyface

    daisyface Senior Member

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    rayseone-lookin good i like ur y alot
    verse-keep doin them simples, imo the last one is the best
    tomb-maybe dont connect your letters, and the top of the B needs to come down
    capo-i dunno what it is exactly but it looks like it could be cool haha
  15. shax44

    shax44 Senior Member

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  16. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Shax...what are you talking about...start all over again...what the was a pen sure you can do a G in that style...waste of crit there...sayin start all over again..
  17. shax44

    shax44 Senior Member

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    make me a G in that style then, if it looks good, you're right, if not, you're not right
  18. exhale

    exhale Senior Member

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    shax - maybe make your right part of the x seperate? i donoo

    umm i was just trying stuff out..
  19. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    The PCK LWG and the 11 are better than the actual piece.The letters aren't working.Just do bsome bar lettering for now and revisit this style when you've got your letters down.
  20. hungr

    hungr Senior Member

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    near: hungr has no colours at his house...shady fill