What do you want people to say? Make the right leg of the R come out further.

 

make yur D and O look more like a D and an O then cuz it looks alot like aEME

 

yeah ahah that does not look like an O demo. and i see an S after the M

 

erm in that cas glass ill pm u link later to show u some good influences that recon and gesus showed me wen i tryd my hand at that
amkah u scouse?

 

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Trying a new style and toned it down a bit.Tryed a different D but it's shit.

 

Demo- lose some of the extensions to further clarify the letters, looking hawt tho
Drak- looking goood
Morne- maybe lose the 3D for the moment and just focus on the actualy letters befor worrying about things like colour,3D etc.
Nasr- same thing as morn, lose the colour and 3D and just work on the base of your lettering.

These are all eXchanges i did quickly the other night when i was in a sketching mood.

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drak, te only thing thats really been buggin me with all ur stuff is the gap between the A and the K at the top haha but other than that, good stuff

 

demo at first glance thats really dope. and drak again a relaly good take on ur same original style. the D did get a little small though.

 

for this girlll.
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alexla?

 

the d is fine, switch up your other letters to make it flow more.

 

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Crits?

 

quicki...

 

new piece..crits please..i think its way better than the one i posted earlier
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^^
dont go ahead of what your not capable of yet, work on yur 3d

and yea its better

 

yea...iwas thinkin about not even doin 3d but i gave it a shot...never tried it be4. ima try to stay w/ throws

 

bump cuz i got no crits

rush -go simpler, use bars

taste - dope but abit messy

snail dont overlap your letters so much

 

rush-the 3d wouldnt go all the way around the letters and the h is a lil wierd
seyar-not bad, try doin what i do, i put a thicker uni of black around the whole thing then do a different color uni it makes it stand out a lil more nut if u dont want to, dont haha