im so stupid, i posted my piece without criting, vice-i dont like your throw it lacks flow and style real-nice steez 2kos-fresh throw great flow through it southpole-make the letters all around the same size
mine are a little sloppy [Broken External Image]:http://images.uploadimago.net/99339IMG_0001.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://images.uploadimago.net/99339IMG_0003.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://images.uploadimago.net/99339IMG_0002.jpg
Indeed.You're letters are going everywhere in all sorts of sizes.The letters are unreadable and the 3d is shocking.Go back and do some simples with no 3d. New handy: View attachment 291462 View attachment 291463 I know I was told to leave the arrows.I did this before I read the crits.
drak i love the D but its bitin sky heavy. but you oppened your R and A up at the botom but not the K. it would look better stretched out like the other letters. the R is also really dope.
Hey Hey Hey!, How is everyone today? Well did anyone else submit their entry for the Sizurp throwie battle, gunna be a swell turn out I believe. And now for some crap, I would crit, but Whahappen handled that quite nicely lol. Blahh! [Broken External Image]:http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2582/scan0017nq9.jpgwell some random skribbles, A oompa loompa color theme.
woohoo good crits going around everywhere! keep it up!!!! edit: somehow i managed to come up with something decent on the first try. here it is. im not sure about the T. looks... odd. i dunno tho. [Broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/DSC00424.jpg my crits = stinky: not bad. i dont think i can think of any way to crit that it has a solid style. whahappen: in all honesty i dislike and cant read that style but keep it up because from what ive heard your good at it. trim: you would have a much better chance of winning that battle if you did some decent, clean simples. drak: the handies kinda hard to read but the piece is lookin good. seperate the k though like scare 2 said. scare2:if you colored that in by hand thats hella clean. that says sae right? if so its all good. smiles: drak said it. simples. well i think thats it for my crits... oh and chalk your sig makes me laugh every time i read it... that was great... he was in complete denial...
heres the w rotated wat cha think i know its not clean just bear with it my bad krazzie- loving the simples but are there any othere style you can do other than tthe simple ones? atec-the t is hidden or to small fix that trim do simples or quit that shyt is disgusting sae- im not diggin that A and cut some of those extensions off vice- shut the fuck up or battle me
atec- likin the characters steelo-dat is fuckin ill yo [Broken External Image]:http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2455/im001032fq0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8408/im001028em3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/222/im001030kh2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1867/im001024dy1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8008/im001033smalllb3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4415/im001041smallpa2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/870/im000976uh8.jpg
sorry to the toy mods for posting here but i need entrys. only one week left! ***BI-WEEKLY VIRTUAL GRAFFITI BATTLE*** WORD/PHRASE: Any word/ Your name, etc. (there's a prize this week: 1 Montana Can, 3 personalized stickers from Die59, and a small black book) SPECIFICS: Props To BS (or Baze) PROGRAMS: Bomb the World, Vandal Squad, Graffiti Playdo, any graff simulator DEADLIINE: Thur. August 2nd RULES: No digital modifications. All skill levels welcome, but polling depends on the number of entries. Simulators: Graffiti Playdo Vandal Squad Bomb the World Art Pad MOD IN CHARGE: 1nOnly Baze VS FOR DUMMIES: -Click here to learn to take a screenshot. Zoom in if the words are blurry.
trim, trim off (MASSIVE FUCKING LOLS :]) all the add ons and extensions n it might look good. umm.. same old thing
Hungr-nice main piece but the G looks a little thin How are these [Broken External Image]:http://img38.picoodle.com/img/img38/9/7/25/f_BLTzstars1m_49d8bc1.jpg ^yea I know the star fill is crap and lame^ crits
hungrrrr- i love ur throws, i like the peice a lot especially the G and the U, try squishin the right side of the N a little closer together to the left side lol sounds kinda confusing, im not really feelin the lil swoop in the R, but i definately like ur throwies! make me a throw up for my name
Hungr, you're probably on of the best writers in the toysection at the moment. Keep up the good work. Blitz, your fills are waaaaay too busy. Your letters need A LOT of work, I suggest reading through the New2Graff thread. And keeping shit simple. Pear, that R would make for a dope K haha. But yeah looking good, keep working on it. Trim, those extensions are quite bad, if you worked on your letter structure and got that down and then came back to that add on style it could turn into something nice, but it needs massive amounts of work. Nez, it's not too bad, if I was you I'd do less fills and more sketches though, still need to work on letter structure and just coming up with some nice letters though.
stinky- ur letters r pretty dope, still needs a lil work vice- everything flows pretty good cus they all got the little triangle things but the letters need work, maybe lose sum rounded corners and put sum curves in, dnt worry my throws arent the best either nez- ya stick to sketchin lil bit more and lose the crazy fills out for a while hers a throw up i tried, please gime sum critssss http://i12.tinypic.com/4py81uv.jpg
bltz-lose the fills and work on the letters more will u gime crits on these? [Broken External Image]:http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/2791/moer001vd9.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2084/moerqc8.th.jpg