wel slushi.
if i could see it i would crit it better but all i can say is.
i dis like ur 3d on the bottom one.
and nice tags tho.

 

OLD!

but whatever i wanna post something colorfull.

on top. slushi do bars

sacwack thats ill.

 

Hahaha are you telling me to go simple?

 

enigmtic-its a very good start but i think it would be better if u use a fine tip on outlines.
bold tip outlines are gross on pieces.
and work on the bottom one.
the top K arrow is a not.
just do a simple and add some do dads and knick knack paddy wacks and u will hopefully have a nive piec.

 

the bottom one isnt mine btw.

yeah i need thin tips etc.

 

no, im telling you to use bars to construct your letters, theres a difference.

plus i cant seee what the fukkk that is.

 

fuck amkah those hands are nice
kasr your a looks kinda thin
tried out simples/piecing whatever
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eh there okay i guess...

 

I can burn you to shit.

 

whapeen - try to maybe take more time, with everything of yours, even your throws what you are dope at, your hand seems really shakey, i dunno. you have the idea of bars which is good, but your 2nd letter which im guessing is an m doent look like one, look at the M on your keyboard, the 2 middle bars slant downwards, make it do that, becuz right now it could be mistaken for 2 Ns, the 2nd one is better than the first in my eyes, seems like you kinda have an idea on flow too, you just needa execute it.

on the other hand yeah i agree with sume, that is the best ive ever seen from you amk, good work

mek dope, but to be honest i wouldnt really go with any one of them, i would try to incrperate them into one, becuz the top one seems just a lil blockish but is better so if you add a bit more curves etc like the other peice it would look dope.

slushi - take better pics or invest in a scanner or something

kasr - dont connect your letters keep them all seperate and it will look alto better

sackwacko - good stuff, i like the first 2 better, especially the aesop one, the last one just seems a bit more unflowing or something, i dunno the first 2 are more visually appealing tho

leser - the H is not working, the other letters are ok but i think you should come up with a new H


slushi - shut up man keep it to pms

 

bottom

 

am i fucked up or is this sick.
love it..
bang it on a smooth nut Copenhagen train and ill e-kiss ya

Slush..chill man...all he did was say use bars...if your better than him..why retaliate....no beef mang..jus saying

whapen thanks mang..id go back to your throws for awhile..

why not...do the same philly structure on your handys..and do throws with it....itll look sick..and fresh

peace.

oh..Frat...SICCCKKKKK TOP ONE IS FURESH

 

Yeah, sorry urvybody, I just get too excited sometimes. ADD does that to you.

 

Choke everythings good apart from the O and H.They're looking a bit weird.The hole in the O is a bent and so is the H,work on those two and you're good.

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New arrow style.I'm thinking of going back to my old style because I get mixed reactions to my pieces everytime.Some say it's wack do simples,others say It's dope Drak keep it up.Soooo I dunno

 

i was sortve trying to do pieces based around my handstyle structure
didnt think about doing throws with it tho, so ill try that
choke its fresh but like that c is used soooooo much in euro style, atleast like tilt it maybe or bend it somewhere to make it a lil different
drak the arrows have a soft feeling to them while your piece is really sharp, like it just doesnt work for me idk..

 

hello im new at this forum heres some of my work














some crits please

 

Sky: its decent for a beginner, you have a couple good colour schemes, but draw simples, and practice them until your balls fall off.

 

Sky eh?

I suggest you do use blocks for now.

 

do you think y should tho throwies

 

yup