Snot..not feeling the letters at all man..no beef...the onyl letter i like abit is the E..but the rest are bad imo. Hade...you wasting a serious amount of time on those simples...theyere just blocks man..chill...no need for perfect angles ahah..serious Hade....3 - 5 hours...WHAT THE FUCK !! bump for crits on the whole.. View attachment 292601 View attachment 292602 View attachment 292603 View attachment 292604 View attachment 292605 View attachment 292606 View attachment 292607 View attachment 292608 Has it got anywhere...has it got potential...shud i keep on..?.. thanks.. peace.
honestly, i wouldnt spend 3-5 hours on a peice, i do mine in parts, like il sketch it in pencil, then outline, then wen im bored i will fill it, i have so many peices just laying around that have got no farer than the sketching stage, cuz once you do the outline, you should think, oh man i coulda changed it there and switched it up a bit there. and amk - when uyou first started that style i thought omg no way, look at the first sketch honestly i thought you were an idiot, but then i didnt come on until that havok peice and i would easily say they are your best letters, the detail, extensions set in the right places, everythnig makes it better
heres a start.... [Broken External Image]:http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/google535675.jpg crits.... im proly gonna add mor extensions.
snot. it has good flow but i dont like the last letter. is it an A?? because the way the crossbar conects on the left is a bit wack. but as an overall piece i like it. amk. i totally agree with rayse. when u put up the first letters i was like. aww hell no. but it quickly developed. keep ur old style handy but develop this one to perfection for sure. the havok is the best wacksac. i wouldnt add any more stuff. if anything i would take off the bits on either end and drop a 3D to the middle and a simple color job itll look pretty sick. but all the extra connection ticky line things arent necesary it has the makings of a nice simple piece. i would keep it simple.
If you separated these letters and took a look at them on their own, only the k would look right and even then the right leg extension is off. Find a way to balance your letters out, the huge left leg compared to the half sized right leg isnt working on your a and m. Kezia, work on your bar weight. It's all over the place. This is all ive sketched in a while, might bust a few outlines out tonight if I feel up to it. [Broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5061/001jm4.jpg
AMK-those are pretty dope man. keep it up. Snot- i like it, looks pretty good to me. (but i dont know much bout peices, i suck at them.) well i suck in general. but yeh here are some throws i pulled outa my ass. crits are apreciated. [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/269/ak021dy7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/2504/ak022xz6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7136/ak023ks9.jpg peace.
amk i disagree with Sou. i think that that piece has excellent flow. making the letters similar and not simetrical works really well. especially with the connection all along the bottom. does. they look good . i like the bottom one best. but the top right bit on the D isnt right.
does - yeah the top one's d looks a bit too big. the bottom one looks alright though asma - maybe make the top of your m like the rest of the other letters tops? a battle in another forum. says fourth
I never said it didn't flow, I just said the letters are disproportioned to the point that if you took them out and looked at each one on it's own it would look bad. Each letter of a piece should be able to hold its own. exhale your letters are on the verge of illegible and it's mainly because you are using so many layers. Try incorporating drop shadows on the letters or attaching more of those bars together. The structure is there (except for the r). Keep at it. First attempt and a new style and first legit attempt at adding a decent amount of add ons. any crits before I ink it? [Broken External Image]:http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9943/008fl5.jpg
YO AMK Keen on a VandalSquad exchange? Random but I like your shit on there and I'm addicted to that shit right now. I'll post some crits later tonight everyone, I've got mad design work to do for uni right now.
exhale go simpler sou - thats a pretty dope s right? dope throws too some random 2 am bulshizzle outline still in pencil, but im of to bed pcce and crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/3936/lastscangv3.jpg
Word. Caset right. thanks for the tips guys. seyar...feeling the flow and direction of those bottom bars kicking out mang...
Yeaeeeeeeeeeeeeah boi, C/Kaset, whatever tickles your fancy. I'll delete these posts once I know you've seen it.
Rayseone-looking good when are you inking that lol Sou-mvd-looks pretty dope to me ras-realy seeing some progress there keep going Well i tried fatting some letters from my handy so here's a result,and yes i made it on lined paper,the only paper that i found in my house.And i had to scan it,i wanted to take a pic but i was out of batterys View attachment 292650 an attempt at something,the scan made it look dirty View attachment 292651 nways crits
feeling that C and R south...not the A tho..aint working for me.. Yo D_G for you manggg.. View attachment 292670 ill post this here looking for crits on those letters...as i need all the comments i can get at this moment in time on my letters.. im particulary looking to see if the S n E are good.. coz im pretty proud of the S coz i aint rocked one for 1 year now..:O
sick Uuuh..your K is furesh KOVERRRRR View attachment 292694 sorry its soo late...i completley uterly forgot.