ayte stay wit that style but get rid of that swirl on the T exchange wit sky5 wat cha think ruff sketch
---Toy handy battle. Phrase "Master of Disaster" Running through Edward sezer Hands*** Pm him with your entrys!!! --Last day accepting entrys 8/17/07 Again im not the mod, edward just wants me to get people to join. pm him with your entrys -Dusk=D
not done. [Broken External Image]:http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs17/i/2007/223/f/1/okizoo2_by_bigel.jpg
ugh fuckin dumbasses. i hate when people quote the picture right above there post... ayte- that looks 167 times better. now you should try keeping the letters at the same height cuz it looks lik. big el- you make me wanna quit. <3 heres the watered down version of one of my trillions of styles.
[Broken External Image]:http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3763/graf393nb9.jpg Alittle bit misproportioned but w/e it was done for a friend Zonx?:Liking it the right part of the X seems alittle bit too fat though imo. Bigel:dope as awlays..not really feelin those lback lines in the 3d though..
bigel makes me wanna quit too...rofl. baze- i wish i knew what to give you advice on but your too good for me hah capital- work on your letter structure, and if you are (with the bars and such) continue it up man srry i kinda rushed...
^head straight to the graffiti tutorials by hepos and sky. ditch the coloring for now, concentrate on the abcs.
bigel- i aint sure what it says, maybe erace? fresh none the less man [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MurkBattleSketchUnfinished.jpg battle sketch, word is MURK i like the M and U so far but i need help with my R crits?
lol does look like erace, its erape. independent -- new to graff thread. bigels -- seeing your stuff makes me wanna sketch hard, not quit . diggin the last e especially. silent -- why you're battling now, i don't know, but for starters, m and u aren't proportional. M is wider than the U, simplify your structure even more. might wanna beef up your letters a little and that R is hideous. don't bend the base bar (leftmost, should be straight and not broken into 2 pieces). don't extend the half circle so far out, and move the right leg to the right further. R<-- see?
few quick crits before i go to sleep.. ^^ your M widens at the bottom, you U narrows at the top but you r is just an R.. the leg on the R dose not need to connect to the base bar on the left play with it a bit more and with the curve looks like yea slipped up a bit indapendant.. no more colors buy pencils and do bars!!! capitol.. same goes for you buddy Big el.. your a bastard lol Teach me? lol pce out fuckers lol
GOing on about a month. Gh0s wasnt working for me so Im writing Dais now. Couple hands thrown in for good measure. I know I may need to go alittle simpler, just wanted to try alittle style down.. Critz welcomed .. thanks View attachment 295452 View attachment 295453 View attachment 295454 View attachment 295455 View attachment 295456 View attachment 295457 wrote this one for my cousin, says eric.. quicky thanks
yo, the third ones the best, keep it clean and simple man, although ur missing a little bit of 3d at the bottom of the a.... heres a digital i did yesterday, it sez insane, ive only done it simply at the moment...cant be asked to do anymore blending....gunna use some of the shapes and angles to do my next piece...ill update wen its done...crits welcome?....
lol your probably gonna hate me for this one but i think those connections look ugly lol and try makeing your bars look more strong i like that style amk but idk i see something different i really liked that havok one but i dk y i dont like this one seti-that shyt is amazing exchange with baze
bigel - woah now im glad i didnt enter that battle independent - lose the colouring paper pencil simples. amk - the havok one was hawt but im not feeling it. [Broken External Image]:http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture248.jpgcmy orange is almost out crits?