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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    god...please crit guys....

    edit: skeelo fuckin crazy mane...i feel like i've seen this style before...wat do you write?
    ink-fuck im not worthy of crittin...its awesome
    boncin-fuck the haters, i love the addons an everything
     
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  2. sKeeLo

    sKeeLo Senior Member

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    walkin the streets of TJ gettin treated like norm from cheers in every brothel i visited yes, maggots on a computer hell no . . . nice to see your still on here, pm me if u want a cardboard paint marker joint done and ill mail it to you . .

    amok - heres a quick joint i did, top one is just straight letter . .. in teh 2nd one i normally look for teh dominant bar of a letter tehn bend it so here i bent teh left bar of the A left bar of M (to replicate teh movement in A) i suck at simple Os then bend teh left bar of teh K . . on teh bottom one you can see how u can add lil tabs (i fucked up every tab on this one) and what not to compliment and fill in some open areas . .its pretty shitty but i hope u get the idea = look to bend/curve 1 bar of every letter

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  3. paste

    paste Senior Member

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    Anteup- Not too psyched about the orange piece, i dunno, just not very striking, I like the feeling of the humanoid throwy thats pretty sweet. Pretty cool handies going there too, nice and flowy.
    Amok-Not too keen on that A or the k for that matter, but k's are rough so I'll cut you some slack on that. :p cause I know you desperately care what I say.
    Inkbits-Real nice. Cant wait to see that beast finished.
    Skeelo- Its nice, but the black will make it pop more and give it some dimensional feel.
    Dracula-Ehhhh, not too sure, its decent. Give it a good fill to make it stand out more.
    Bouncing Soul- I know I already said this in the canvas thread, but that thing looks real promising right now, I cant wait to see that finished.

    There, now you all have some crits, cause I'm just such a great guy.
    -Paste
    I write quake
    PM for trades/exchanges.
     
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  4. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Bump...

    and some dirty ass, shitty, sketch. Not done, by the way, gotta make it less pointy and shit but, whatever, haven't posted a flick in a while.

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    Knews-That "S" is crazy good. Not sure about that shit on the left of the "K" but. as you said, it's not done as of now, so I won't judge it yet.

    Edit: (Because imageshack too long and Hoodrich posted some shit) Hoodrich, your handies are dope, but you need to do something about the "N"s and the "Y". The "A" could use a little work, too. Not bad, though.
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  6. speak1er

    speak1er Member

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    those last 2 are hot hot fire

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  7. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    yooo Skeelo feeling em maaan

    speaker...dude ... chill man. .. draw basic lettyering..no colour...aighttttttt...use bars like skeelo did for AMOK.

    heres a Scife sketch for sum dope head.

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    The E is small but im changin up my style ..
     
  8. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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  9. Akshun

    Akshun Senior Member

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    speaker go way more simple it makes doing styles alot easier

    amk-i think u should seperate the e and f cuz all ur other letters are spaced so it just dont look right

    bouncing good shit i like it

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    new throwie style just trying a bunch of shit out tell me wat u think of this
     
  10. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    my daily grime while studying binary.
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    closer up
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    new style? its gonna say meat your smile when its finished. idk what to do with the T though it totally fucks it up.
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    and stickies cause i <3 you ppl.(thats why im posting them here, in the bbooks)
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  11. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    Ace shit bro, that throw gets better everytime I see it.

    Personally I'm not feeling the new style, if I was you I'd stick with what you're doing, it's hot.
     
  12. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    canvas i just did.
    im hoping someone thinks im decent and wants this.
    im asking for $15 and shipping from ohio,
    but the price in negotiable.
    and im down for trades of almost any type.
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  13. Billburg

    Billburg Senior Member

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    hoodrichsuka- the "ant" look like there almost discontected from the rest or somthing

    amk- yo "ife" look really close compard to the first letters and your f looks weird for some reson

    sex without condoms- the one tht you said is your new stlye or w.e. im likin that alot but your right yo t is kinda fucked up lookin

    now heres a throwie im workin on so crits please

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  14. KASE2

    KASE2 Senior Member

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    CITER - i lyk it man it jus looks nice
    SNAP - i wuld add tha lil thing on top of tha '"S" on tha top of tha "A"
     
  15. iris

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  16. ...AMOK...

    ...AMOK... Member

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    snap- it looks good man i think u should add those bumps to the S and the A though
    iris- idk go simple bro and try to make it a lil cleaner

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    better?
     
  17. iris

    iris Member

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  18. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    amok, your shit looks too forced, let it floww mann

    iris - with some tweaking thta style could be ill, keep working with it

    rela - simple dope character man, props

    kovr - ill shit too, i say keep with your style you got not feeling the new one as much, that binary ish is good too

    bouncing -- fooking ill shit

    so i ofunda buncha markers decided to go to town and fill a sketch hardcore aha, yes the fill pretyty much likcs balls crits?
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  19. KASE2

    KASE2 Senior Member

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    SEYAR - im feelin that fill homie. stay up

    crits on my shit por favor
     
  20. Akshun

    Akshun Senior Member

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    kase i like the letter style only thing with ur white paint marker fill try and use the same strokes to make it look clean. so if u go vertical stay vertical yadadamean

    reyseone- i cant make out the letters cuz ur outline isnt thick enough. thicken up that outline and ull be straight. nice fill though.

    iris-that style would be dope if the letter structure was there. but i can barely make it out. just keep sketchin that style and make tweaks here and there to give it form

    now bump for crits
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