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  1. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    the bawksr is back....there seems like a lot of new kids joined over the summer...hmm lets see here..:

    Fatel the second last sketch is my favourite, youre on the way to a cool euro style but remember, if youre gunna go outside of the box with your letters you cant automatically assume you dont draw them cleanly, tkae alot of time with nice bold clean lines if you want those letters to pop

    calculatiing, your hiding to many letters in the first sketch, and that last letter, r? or lowercase n? is too fucked with to see what it is, the throwup on the other hand..paint

    shred, im glad youre starting off with simple letters, but sketches become 10 times worse when you add that awwwwful outline thats like a centimetere away from all the other letters

    Sample, hype shit, your first sketch is better, but im loving the M in the second one, dont try to go too crazy, your simple stuff speaks enough for itself

    silentchaos, those extensions youre adding to your letters dont work, especially on the O, you have the shape of simple letters down, so keep them that way

    Tasty, it looks decent but i cant give crits to a scrunched up piece in pencil, taske time, spread out your letters, and use some damn pen
  2. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    Seve-looks ill im realy loving the colouring
    Samp-those letters are dope,you improved madly
    morne-make it cleaner,letters are ok
    cyber-looks cool would look good when painted
    Emel-nice simple
    stumpy-new to graff thread right away
    escobar-keep using bars
    taste-not realy feeling it

    exchange i done with dawsek

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    sticker i made

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    random piece done on a show box

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  3. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    south-pole dont write amen, this is a freight king in the south, not only that but think of who else write amen, so common, be more original

    tasty- its hard for me to make out your letters, you should give it a pen outline, and erase all the other bullshit
  4. REAL..

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    samp1e i really like that second one i know what ya mean bout the influence but i reall dig it... kep it up.. xD

    haha ill keep doing what i want... sorry if no one likes it rofl
    heres it finished and the thicker parts on the outline are intential for 'style' purposes lol...
    i may also draw in on black card one day in silver and hopefully it will look like this rofl i inverted this shit just to see and i love it... lol
  5. Stonk

    Stonk Senior Member

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    Calculating infinity - great stuff. that throwy is so nice
    Morn - i'd say try some different letters..those look a little funny

  6. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    pretty dope manz.
    heres shit from my new black book
    ^already posted i believe^
    crits, opinions, thanks all.
  7. alive

    alive Banned

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    funny. this style now is what i think TRASH's style SHOULD be. nothing personal.
  8. alive

    alive Banned

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    and this is gorgeous

    although crits, if i may, i at first thought it read, lower case aSS. do u see it? i think the right side of the A just flailed a little much.

  9. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Tonk-The simples are nice but only the bottom K is right.Also Make the D look rounder.

    Tasty-Very nice,but get a better camera if possible.

    Samp-Like the style man but I'm really not digging that A.I don't like the lines that go inside the M and I think you should get the inside bit's completely inside the S and the left of the A.

    Hade-Again I think you should get rid of all the inside bits and keep the bars consistent.

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    New outline.Should be going on a canvas.
  10. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    alive are you kidding me, trash's style right now, is wonderful. theres nothing wrong with it, his work is alot higher quality. no beef.
    sample, the style is dope, but the letters should be defined more.
    it'll make it clear'r
  11. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    HadeP:dope color shitty letters. bring them closer. character has potential.
    Mr Tasty: i think its dope. but yeah use some pen. but from what i can read i think its looking good.
    calculating infinity: thats rly dope. you using decos to color that?
    Samp1e: i think its dope.
    South-Pole: bring your letters closer and work on the top right of that e its curved in instead of out.
    REAL: that looks ill as fuck.
    Stonk: try to keep your letters even. no too bad but keep trying keep them blocks.

    decided to post this here since i never get critz in the character thread. so critz?
  12. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    kelio, try and keep everything centred
    the whole charak doesnt really flow,
    the head is dope, but the body isnt centred with the head at all.
    and the arm thats holding the baloon isnt as high as the other arm.
    also with the baloon tran and draw a more rounder/or more oval shaped(depending on the look your going for)
    the ears are pretty dope. but on the inside of the ear try and keep it the same length from the out side of the ear all the way around, if that makes sense.
    also whats shitty about my letters?
  13. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    thank lord.

    please crit these Trickssssss

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    well...Alive...i think Trash's style is dope and fresh.

    drak...take it staeady going way you dotn need too....keep it up with those simple letters you used to bust...the BOMB one...i carnt remeber what it exactly said..they was gurd.

    And welcome back daddy trickstah
  14. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    thanks for some good critz hard to get some good ones bombing science.
    HadeP:your letters arent even, i know people are always saying bars but its true just make all of your letters out of bars. even bars. keep them the same width. and try to keep your piece the same size. just clean it up you really dont have to worry about coloring and 3d and shit. just keep working on your letters not saying go all the way back to simples but just try out some bars.
    and amk its dope. color that shit.
  15. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    i don't know to take this as a good thing or a bad thing or if it's a thing at all : o

    i had some inking errors :/

    your piece has a lot going on in it... might just be that it isn't the cleanest cause the pencil hasn't been erased but i think you've got too much going on, stuff going where it shouldn't be.
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  16. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    i used bars before :s the sketch is based on bars, i just added extentions, and i did forget to keep the bars the same width and length, i also added bends to the bars and stuff. but i sort of see what your saying about the width, over all is the style okay tho?
  17. emel

    emel Senior Member

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  18. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    yeah its good style just keep worrking oon it. it will look good eventually.
  19. HadeP

    HadeP Senior Member

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    thanks man
  20. REAL..

    REAL.. Member

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    DRAK: i really like that style it has potential...
    KELIOS: i like that chars head work on the bodys flow a little but i like it, its quite original...
    AMK: smooth as usual...
    and bump for crits i know most people hate the extensions but id liek some eal crit cheers... xD