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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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  2. pez ss

    pez ss Senior Member

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    real- thats dope now finish it ad some colour a nice fill and some 3d do a back round to.
    hyper- i was going to tell u to do block letters then i see u did that last peice is sex
    edward- lovin all of it
    sample- use less 3d and less extentions at the bottom of the s.
    a simpler thing i did
    ai243.photobucket.com_albums_ff27_qust_aversimple.jpg and a quik throw i did for chalk ai243.photobucket.com_albums_ff27_qust_chalkthrow.jpg crits comments??
  3. daisyface

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  4. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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    captain - the o is too small
    samp1e -think it would look better if you add something to the bottom of the p
    seek139 - nice style
    daisyface - good but not feelin the p and the a
    just a pen freestyle i did...says "TRICK"
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  5. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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    daisy i'm gonna go work on another piece but in pencil this time...i freestyle all of the pieces. because i usually keep outlines as painting is an everyday thing for me
  6. emokid

    emokid Senior Member

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    pretty funky daisyface

    jers, keep working on letters, decent though


    pencil outline. yes the p and the r are meant to be smaller.
  7. bountyhunter113

    bountyhunter113 Elite Member

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    looks fresh, but some letters need work same goes for ur handy
    jers-lose the arrows and we'll discuss your structure
    samp-heh lovin everyting but the fill,lolz

    yea guys i realized how garbage that handy was that i posted.......i've improved like 100x since yesterday.........was practicing durin all meh classes ;p flix of new stuff on sunday
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  8. darthbaker

    darthbaker Senior Member

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    damn thats tight because thats my name hahah nice u thats the only letter i dont like too much in my name but nice dude
  9. emokid

    emokid Senior Member

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    with colour this time. well. some colour. badly coloured in fact.
  10. darthbaker

    darthbaker Senior Member

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    my horrible attempt at baltimore handstyle
  11. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  12. Seek139

    Seek139 Senior Member

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  14. Gumdrop.Behemoth

    Gumdrop.Behemoth Senior Member

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    or instead of making a upper case a try a lower case imo
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    sKeeLo Senior Member

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  16. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    sky that is ill man but on the c in caer, it looks like a E because of the extension, there is a few messed up extenisons but other than that it looks ill
  17. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    pear- what roolette said.
    dawsek- good as always, nice euro feel to it.
    seek- i have no idea what to say cuz 3-d aint my thing
    skeelo-no comment cuz i cant read it

    new throw im workin on
  18. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    skeelo the dc to nyc is ill i cant wait to see it finished
    seek i rele like ur block 3-d style
  19. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    pear, it's nice, but it doesn't seem like you've tried to variate your style/letters at all. Might be time to try and progress.

    daws, not much to crit, try making it even cleaner?

    sky it's just a teeny little bit less awesome than usual, but it seems you know that already.

    seek, #1 define the letters more, right now you really gotta look for 'em. #2 try spending more time perfecting your 3d and cleanliness. usually your stuff is just a little bit off and a little bit unclean, but it's enough to almost ruin it. your shit would be really hot otherwise though.

    bumped for a couple more crits
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  20. Blackeyed_Pea

    Blackeyed_Pea Senior Member

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    work on your structure a bit captain, your letters arent sized the same and it goes thick to thin in a sort of bad way, just keep the sizing in general consistant for now.