daws you bite just encase you forgot I love how they are getting progressively worse and less structured as you try and make them look less like bastardo bites
Chalk... that looks pretty sick. its fucking clean. so after i posted my last shit, everyone said it was above my level. so i drew a simple one, and its even worse than the more complicated ones. and yes i need to work on my tag/ handstyle and then just a throwie. i know, the fill is outside of the outline in some places... i dont care, i was just fuckin around.
OK, DONT PUT ARROWS AT THE END OF UR LETTERS, (sry just relised i had cap locks on) use bars to make the letters in ther simpilest forms, so for the letter A you should draw // = \\ and put them together, plus dont colour ur shit just yet no point wasting ink on progresive stuff
see... i know this your giving me a critique, and thank you, but this is what i dont understand about anyone on here. im an art major, i can do 3 bars and form a simple A, theres no point in doing it over and over and over in everyone i do if ive moved past that shit and now im trying to develop the style and the hookups and shit. i mean, no offence to anyone but i think most people can do simple letters? i dunno, sorry if im seeming like an ass im just tired of hearing about bars when i can do bars, im trying to develop my bars now. ya know?
well it dose make sense and any one who dosnt suck will tell you simples help a shit load, i mean u gave props to chalk in ur post, that shits mad simple, simple dosnt have to mean boring, if ur so positive u got basic letters down bust a few simples then begin to lean the letters,bend the bars and add a lil flaver. you cant go from dead simple to mad arrows over the course of one sketch, ther need to be many many pages of horrible looking experiments and ajustment to ur simples befor u get the funk,,, ask chalk
you aint gotta do it super simple, just use simple extensions, try not to make letters so complex, and the arrows made that one horrible, way too many arrows
sketch gave you good advice . . . the sooner you get letter foundation down the sooner you can move on . . . ill edit a pic in cuz this page is all talky talky [Broken External Image]:http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/1970/1282876ca7.jpg
speak: don't do arrows coming of the ends of your letters,and as much as you dont wanna hear it do back to simple bars i wanted to develop style mad quick and it didnt work so i went back to basics now id say im alright... chalk: good stuff
lol, ofcourse i can, i jus like to draw during class coz it's a way to tune out those fucking boring ass lectures chalk- i love that grass......sooo god damn realistic neways.......can i get ne critz? i alrdy gave critz to ppl on last page
klepto- dont do arrows and get basic letter structure down first, just cuz yur an art major dont mean u get to by pass all the basics. chalk- sick as always skeelo- cant see but its probably great mike jacobson- well thats yur mistake right there. [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneArrows.jpg just some shit from today, the E is the worst letter imo crits?
Morne- ima only tell you this once try not to make your sketches so big and also dont have your letters so fat i needa get you some good markers hahha and for your "O" it doesnt look like you sketched it ALWAYS sketchi it and start from the middle circle (the whole) then draw the out side of it, It helps lots.
wow and can i ask why not? [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneSchool2.jpg more shit from yesterday that i forgot about crits on this too? lol k to everyone above me, that piece of paper is is big as a piece of loose leaf and yeah my O's suck. and i hate biting ppl.
morne-change it up some, no addons yet sky-lukkin gud bro, always loved your style, i love seein ur ish before its painted/inked chalk-the gras is fuggin crazy bro, put it in a peice sumtime, the simps arent as good as they could be better, the c is alright, the h bars dont flow, the a isnt good at all straighten the bars sum, the k is jus a noodle, straighten the bars daws-no bodys gonna crit you till you get ur own style, stop bitin new jizz View attachment 303252 bee cee doubleu CRITTTY PEAS
okay... tyo those of u that gave me advise... thanks. personaly thats the kind of critique that i want... not just "that sucks... do bars" because noww i know how to improve, not just how to go back to simples.