lol okay um try lining them up, straighten the L, just us a line or something for the E cause the can aint workin, and the E's too long
know what fuck it all, just do the letters off your keyboard first than start bending and curving them
ras...bosss, fuck amk i aint callin you that i know you as ras, but on the real, ive yelled at you and got pissed you alot for months, and check it out, youve gotten better, you dont HAVE to do graffiti 24/7 taking a break wont kill you, i hardly did any this summer, or during these first two weeks at university, but i sat down and sketched yesterday and it felt good again, dont worry, if you like graffiti, then youll just keep doing it, plus youre a teenager, so other weird shit is going on in your head/body, not to get all dr phil on you or anything, word? [Broken External Image]:http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3644/img004ov3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3644/img004ov3.6ac0224974.jpg look at me pulling a double bump hehe braxtons, those arent letters, theyre sharp objects with sharper arrows, go back to basics, copy the letters on your keyboard, word? word. redxdrum, thats still not simple, you have inconsistency at the end of each bar, it gets fatter, then roud, then sharper, even that "simple" letter is all over the place, go even simpler man seek that shits hype, keep it up, try working with really bold clean lines, and try throwing in some shading whahappen, the letters in your throw are there, but you still sketch em out like youre a 4 year old, take some friggin time
ugh fuck this guys. its time to call it quits. on graffiti. been dope knowing all your guys and communicating with yah.. good luck to everyone in here sorry and peace. NAWWWT AHHAHAHAH ASIFF ID QUIT I GOT THIS FAR. EXPECT SUM SKETCHES TOMORROW YALLL.. peace. much love. and Bawk. lawng time no seee mannnnnnnn.. preddy fresh sketch. Edit. and word. i wouldnt mind some of those old rants again ahah.
View attachment 303366 new simple oh andbraxtons, , use the letters on your keyboard, and when you get them down and the letters look like this m minus the cracks and the exstesnsion on the right of the k , it should look like this minus the thing i just said.= View attachment 303367 then when you got thos letters down, try to bend them. hope i helped you .
i think Ys are too complicated better off with I, nice and symetrical and daws, thats good, but in the first on the D looks more like an O and the k looks like a D
it feels as if the l doesnt fit in with the rest. its more squared off and jagged and the rest of the letters are more rounded. just keep at it though, they're looking a little better man.
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you may end up goin through a few name changes to find a letter combo thats works well trust me, i went through like 5