[Broken External Image]:http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l203/Synergy-X/meh008.jpg very quick, literally 7 seconds. crits?
so this got overlooked because some guy colored with crayons? fane- try and take some time into your piece and not 7 seconds?
4 months, 4 Black book pages, lol @ progression [Broken External Image]:http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/5276/drkny8.jpg lol @ colouring also.
dude just shut up. your taking up the space in this thread. and you want critz? try working with bars. and make your r's more like r's and not like total shit. and vesk. work with bars too. and try and keep your letters consistent the e and s are bigger then your k and v.
dork- idk really know just keep sketchin,your d looks really far out from the whole peice sank- soooo nice i wouldnt change a thing about that popshots- the thing on the i is played but its all nice [Broken External Image]:http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1931/jknkjneditedsu6.jpg bored at schooool
yo where ya get that train at? im not feeling the extensions on your letters:[ they look out of place? but i dont know. i dont use extensions yet.
capitol: Id say try and work on getting your outline a bit cleaner (long pen strokes would help) popshots: Love it man, Im a sucker to stuff in ball point. mend: Thats a nice progression dude, keep it up! codesix: you should maybe take a little more time on your practise, I know throws gotta be quick, but practise till the quick ones look craaazy, then post em up. ghozt: Looks good man, maybe a little bit of a bigger pic next time? sank.: Love that style man. Nice and clean! No more color fills from me for a while, Ima keep workin on my structure. heh I love 3D and ball point pens "SWAVEY" View attachment 305686 Critz or Comments? Swavey
swavey, youre getting close. keep rockin those bars hard. maybe try something new with the A though. nasr, sick train if you drew it, but the handy is pretty wack. and your extensions dont really seem to flow with the letters very well.\ sank, very symmetrical between each letter. youve put a lot of work into those, the only thing i might say is move them a tad closer. but thats up to you. fane, dont spend 7 seconds on a sketch. if youre gonna sketch, sit down and work on shit. its not a race. lol. mend, i would eliminate the pointiness on the top left of the E. make it a little less pronounced. if thats the word im even thinking of. if im even making sense... [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scbab.jpg yep yep yep. my bars need to be the same size.
hey dork thats not working go simpler because you dont have solid enough letter structure. your handstyles are nice tho. doomdoks go get photobucket or something so you can post image codes yeah go visit the new to graff thread and learn about bars. youulll hear that allot for a while. along with go simpler probably. .and welcome to bombing science sank. i think you actually just pulled off connecting all ur letters. props. nasr go simpler. ur extensions are uncontrolled and ur structure isnt bumpin. swavey word. i like ur 3d allot. but thats about it. ur going simpler but when dudes say simple they mean keyboard. beacause the bends youre putting in dont flow well right now. they look awkward and forced but its all progression and this shit takes mad time. props for takin the advice of goin simple and not bitching about it. scab ur bars are actually quite nice. keep progressing ur letter style. and since youve got ur bars so well. i think itd be tight to see a different style from you. a couple pages back dawsek did some simples that were reall fresh. try em like him. keyboard. try a curved S and C etc. just to do a different type of bars. maybee fatten em up a bit too. but ur gettin better. hey ante up. heres that exchange i got to draw in all my classes today so i did hella work. im like the letters but not the piece. and its done with crayolas again ahaha. and heres some other new stuff
word sample. i agree when i saw it finished i kinda though... oh ive seen that a million times. and i feel what amk is saying. but im just starting to progress into more wild kinds of stuff and am only now starting to develop style. thanks for the words sorry for the doub post
ha, if u didnt get mah pm then i did the wrong name, i'll post up "scare" anyways, i'll have ur east sketch up by tommorow and the ian sketch is pretty nice...make the lines on the 3d a little crisper
Nasr - It's alright, but your extensions don't really make sense or flow that well Sank - clean and a really nice style Scare - looks sick
ahaha, first time throwin mah letters together, i kno its shit, but its a pencil freestyle, View attachment 305718 nem-bend ur bars swavey-dont bend ur bars
Just a curious question: If I dont bend my bars or make my stuff simpler how will I ever make cool designs? I can make an un-bended boring letter easy. Thats why Im trying to make things more interesting? I just dont see how making my stuff "unbended" will help me much? Swavey Please not that this message is honestly curious, Im not tryin to be a smart ass or anything
round bars just kicked my ass. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/roundbars.jpg what the fuck just happened...
Aight, last post before bed heh. I decided to take a small break from my bar practise, and drew this up. Personally I like it heh, especially the 3D. "Swavey" View attachment 305797 Comments or Crits?? Swavey