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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
you're always down on yourself man.. cheer the fuck up...work on your simples.
silentchaos14: take that simple u just did and find one of your first sketches. u will see improvment just because your dong simples. keep it up!
zens it looks way better with that curve u did on the n
just make it taller like u did on the first one
and try like makeing some of ur bars start in diffrent spots
its hard to explain so look at this
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all i did was drop the right side of ur n just a little
i think it looks better
just make ur letters less simple
cus u have stright up simples down
yeah yeah, so I write PILLS - PILZ - PILSKILL - PILZROCK - PILAR - PILLER - PILLSTAR - PILSUCK - ZLIP - PYLZ and any other way you can fuck yourself with the fucked up letter flow I chose. I been writing off and on for about uh, two-three years? Fuckin, MSK, AWR, TATS and guys like EWOK, REVS, GLUE, ATLAS really inspire me to push my letters farther. Im going to start practicing more I just want some constructive criticizm.
thank you fube and blue steel but honestly im sick of fuckin simples and i aint goin anywhere yet, im more or less back to where i was with morne. pillz u may be gettin a pm from a certain 666 member.
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I love this type shit.
that K is a little wierd
1. Stop writing Pills
2. If you really have been writing for 2-3 years and thats where you're at, just stop now.
Harsh but whatever.
bipolar- nice letters
i aint post'd in a mineute.
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bipolar- nice letters
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blue steel-stuff looks mad dope,feeling the letters like the colouring
pills-needs some work
ninja-first letter:try making your first bar the same size as your second one
second letter-erase it
third letter-loooks ok but take off those arrows,and try making your bars the same size
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South Pole- The fill distracts from the letters. If you used a bigger marker for the outline it might be different, but as is, it looks strange. Also, I've never been a huge fan of having those type of faces in letters, but that's just me.
I can't remember the last time I posted here.
A few variations on a theme:
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I'm on the fence about the squiggly extensions, and I know the T is the weakest letter.
I'm not really feeling the S .. especially in the first one don't overlap the bottom part of the S over the top part.
Eh... I can understand that. I still think it looks interesting, though. Most S's are pretty similar and I was trying to spice it up. Other than that is there a specific thing you don't like about the S?
Sort-the fill was made to distract from the letters
im realy feeling that style,not realy feeling that arrow on the t though and not
much your t
I'm very off and on but, I'm not quitting this shit. It lives inside me. I might change my name, but it's unlikely. You guys should know what I mean when I say I've been OFF and ON for those 2-3 years... Mostly writing to avoid classwork, Im out of highschool now and you'll see me apply myself. watch out.
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little simple from last night
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exchange for G-fat. didnt put too much effort into it as u can see lol
crits on both?
terower- on the last one it looks like sorf so i might wanna lose the extension on the T
pils: just invest in some better markers. or the time it takes to go rack some.
terower: im likin the style, the second one is lookin the illest and that f looks sick.
blue steel: damn man, thats lookin reallllly nice. and the character is tight aswell.
soutpole: im likin the style and all, but is it a k/kife, or an L/Life?
anyways, some sketches from recently.
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it's an L
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