View attachment 308466 View attachment 308467 practice. love or hate welcome. nars- fix your s, some of them look like e's. looks like u work hard on your fills, i think it looks good man, but hit some more simples like mine. u will be amazed on how much u progress. calo- its ok, just about the same crits as nars, u know what? u all need to keep at the simples, im mean do what u wanna do, u dont have to just do simples.
fube-go for the bottom one, not feelin the top throw as much as your others nars- i am not feelin much of your letters, fills, bg, ect. look good, but work on your lettering
thanks for crits KUNTA:yeah i might start doing some of that simple stuff yours clean imma try it out soon ACES ONE:thanks for pointing that out lol im still getting used to this shit
[Broken External Image]:http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1121/jjjjjj003tk3.jpg I tried going simple but with some curve, can anyone help me out?
yeah u kinda lost yur curve after the first letter. try just doing two horizontal lines across yur page and following those and eventually take them out and it should help. it helped me alot.
[Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/ZenSketch2.jpg ran out of room cuz im an idiot. gonna throw some curve or something into the next one i do. crits?
ace- i like it just try to go simpler and a lot bigger narsy- i love it keep going kunta-the first one is alright but i really dont like the second one for some reason just keep sketching you will get it. verm-i love it its clean flows nice job cher-3d is a bit off but letters are nice just try to make them a bit smaller zen- you are getting better each time i see it keep working i will have some pics up in a bit when i get time
AW you guys are all getting along and being nice and constructive and actually producing some decent shit fube i personally like the first one more, dont feel like you need to simplify your shit, thats you, you know? keep fucking with the first one, the k's just a little off, i can see what youre going for but you didnt hit it narsy, shits fresh, but alot of its colouring, you got a cool old school/new school euro fusion going on, keep it up, dont be afraid to remember its a PIECE, so not only does each letter have to be good, but they all have to go together apoc and roulette, nice simples, fix your R roulette, you got lazy on it, the C and E are nice and simple though, thats awesome that you guys are starting out the proper way as for everyone else on this page, i can only say the same thing i always say, go simple or go choke on a bean sprout and stop posting your junk that you KNOW is junk, people cant TEACH you graffiti, it takes a little fucking ceativity
just try this if theirs a person out their writing ur name thats better than u then just change ur name thats like writing saber but u live in europe
crits for all in general, I cant say shit about ur letters n stuff, if you like the way they look, roll with it. You dont wanna be stuck getting up with a shitty style that u hate and just cant get to flow. But i have to say, at least have ur stuff looking half decent, know what I mean? If people say eg. "loose the tail on ur e, it looks wack" but you actually like the way it looks, keep it, its just one persons opinion. but if you get swamped over by people that hate your shit, improve! sketches from school today... This one has faces in the shape of the letters above.
hahaa everyone in the last page called you kunta *_* i'd say go with the first one though... the 2nd one.. eeehh.. ;/
libre those characts look dope,and that first sketch is niiiiice nars your fills are better than your letters,for me letters should be better than the fill,so that means try doing simples for a while Ace change your name if theres already a Sake getting up in your area or else try working on those simple cause your E is the only decent letter yet fube-that funta throwie is ok,not feeling the k though silent-you got better,got straigther lines,looks more clean but non the less you still need more work and loose those extensions on those letters man whoaa haven't posted shit here in a while,keep getting better and better i don't have much time to find my cam,so i only scanned this unfinished outline,whoa can't even remember the last time i wrote my whole name View attachment 308514 more shit comming,just don't have enough time to post them
seti- wtf u doin in the toy forum south pole- now thats sick! no need for a fancy fill, the letters alone look nice!
ayte the e's right bar that supports the hole is way too big changed mah name to awar [Broken External Image]:http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4990/picture203qb0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/1732/picture202rl7.jpg i fucking love w's