ahh. im not trying to bite it. i just kinda wanted to adopt the basic structure until im comfortable enough to move on to my own style. if thats allowed.
torn keep using ur bars and develope your style of off them your on the right track so keep at it maybe instead of making the letters tall maybe try like style them out a bit make the peice wider but not like making the leters fat (if that makes sense) and in the last one work on the o because its just kinda floating up there lol but your on the right track so keep it up make
wing - start fresh and work on letter structure and even proportions, your not ready for style yet man.
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addons dosent have to be the answer to a good piece. but u have got a nice fill and style. just need to work on the letter stucture.
nahhh [Broken External Image]:http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3646/picture207sg0.jpg hahah fucking wack simple thing [Broken External Image]:http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8779/picture206mv8.jpg its a lower case a then w then lower case a then r [Broken External Image]:http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/8435/picture205uv0.jpg
i don't like the R too much in that torn south-pole, the top part of the leg looks too far out don't like my N [Broken External Image]:http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2394/im001317ff6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2535/im001316ly4.jpg
whahappen. stop posting throwies in this thread. theres already a thread for that. some gangsta shit.. some wackness. some un finished, bad picture type shit ya hurd? and a throwie mayne. ***WEEKLY THROWUP BATTLE (Advanced/Toy)*** WORD: Kunta SPECIFICS: 3 colors max. paper or wall. DEADLINE: Fri. October 12th RULES: This battle is for writers of any skill level. No digital modifications. One entry per person. MOD IN CHARGE: 1nonly Baze
[Broken External Image]:http://spc.fotologs.net/photo/44/18/0/rtcwing/1192111339_f.jpg And bumping again...
Baze I like the first one but I think I like the throw even more. So clean looking and pops real nice.
... http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8489/graffiti007tq1.jpg this isnt really the best example, at all, but theres a few similaties. the handstyle, not shown here, almost matches yours. EMOW does a face in all of his o's. meow is emow rearranged. ill have better examples soon...
nez89- not really feeling that first piece, the can isnt very original and the drips stuff it up. Letters are looking good though, try jazzing them up wing - did u copy those letters off graffitigen or something? I dunno, but try cleaning that up and try keep the letter thickness consistent. scoot - :S letter structure man heres some of my shit: