whahappen -- damn, lots of improvement since the last time i remember looking at your throws. namely the 2nd and the last pic, diggin those especially. work at keeping your lines clean and steady, as difficult as it may be with a pen. jers -- hot. you've been putting in work an it shows.
Final entry for competition on another site. [Broken External Image]:http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1130340cropped.jpg
daws there both sik i like the first more but the bottom should line up togther u no what i mean? the da is a little shorter than the rest but its still real freash
******s******s******ss! my favorite toss ive ever done. i know the R is too big. The R sucksss ^cant think of Rs for the last 2
yeah jers your stuff just keeps getting better don't like the X [Broken External Image]:http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2079/sixpeicead9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/6580/christinapeicelq4.jpg Just tryin out something new, for me anyway not one of my proudest works but eh.. [Broken External Image]:http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9753/im001337qh9.jpg
props to jers, daws, sex......, whahappen nez- not bad, go simpler on the last one, too much goin on and not feelin the extensions for the seka battle [Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5572/june17mo9.jpg quickie..........might leave it like this and put an amazing fill on it, i hate working with more advanced extensions
ill shit up there [Broken External Image]:http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1756/dsc07811nu1.jpg crits on this please
Not bad, Good letter structure. Should look good once you get it all cleaned up. Everyone that posted before him try to tone it down a bit. NES, your last N looks horrible bro, cut down on the extensions.
dust- what the fuck is that????? cant really se it that well, tone it down a bit, work on them letters wisk- work on makin the letters simpler and push them closer, drop the extensions some ***** just dont know how to give crits i guess .....bump
Z FUSE, Hey bro try to make your letters thicker. And dont show your overlapping letters. Try to make your letters a little more straight to many bends make them look sloppy till you get better. My camera is down so hopefully i'll get a flick up later.
I never really got into writing until school, since I'm bored as shit I just draw I have about 15 of these but I like these ones are the best. as for critz phenom the letters look bad and theres to much shit going on but the face nd shading are ill [Broken External Image]:http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6615/schoolshitru9.png [Broken External Image]:http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8255/schoolshit1za3.png