jus found out mah buddy jus got locked up and yes i know my letters tend to go from big to small im working on it
nah i just think the bars are too fat..heres the changes i think would make it look better edit: for some reason i left the line in the middle of the B..that shouldnt be there :/
maste- leave out the weird bars near the letters..and work on your letter structure besar-i like it, but i think theres too much sspace between the e and s, ans i think the the top ending of the S should come out more, if that makes sense. and sorry about your friend getting locked up.
besar- feelin it man, dope simples. maste- good start fam. peep the tutorial thread and rock some bars to get your lettering down. peep what besar is doing and try to emulate that. get the foundation down first. keep drawing, stay up. haha i know im wack at sketching, but i feel compelled to post em. all shit i did today while i was mad bored during thanksgiving. some random ish [Broken External Image]:http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/My Graf/100_2280.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/My Graf/100_2277.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/My Graf/100_2275.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/My Graf/100_2266.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc209/Balance24/My Graf/100_2273.jpg
kk so i fixed the bars on the B and the R and i made the top of the S come out more and i sorta made the gap between the e and the s smaller by extending the end of the s out more lol main r those all pen freestyles?
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the B still looks likda weird to me..try making the verticle bar a little skinnier to give the middle of the B some room
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View attachment 320039 dim- not bad, im diggin your p, i just hate that extention on the top of the e cream-ouuchh. the purple one aint too bad tho. keep doin simples like that. sen- you gotta a dope ass throwie son.
Haha, naw, it is the web cam. It is not supposed to be backwards, but I kinda like it backwards. 3muz ha.
rast try keeping your bars an even width throughout for now. cream, use bars sen it looks good. keep it up.
when i first see the Sume peice i was like wtf that all about..then i see it backwards and whoa...one thing Sume...you always seem to do the peice on a straight line and the letters always the same hight n width and shit..why not mix it up abit ... like different sizes ansd shitttt.. View attachment 320127 View attachment 320128 View attachment 320129 View attachment 320130 View attachment 320131 Fantastic Ras...Rise Of The Sepr Serpr