haha loser i like you man, your a cool guy. JAZE- i like it man, with a bit of tweking it could be soo sweet, the heart of the a is a bit played tho. LOGO- chill with the extentisons, there was a sketch in pen you did on the other page the letters were good you just over crowd your it. FAIL-I dig your stuff man, if it had a nice thick outline it would be hot. TEST- i like it man make the end t the same as the first it will be siko. SEIZE- your simples are sweet as, before you ink it thicken up the middle bar of the s. Never really done throws before, this is my first attempt at one. crits? View attachment 334283
MAKR - I like the new name but the second leg bar on your A is small and on the other letters its long so it messes with the flow a little bit. Cant wait for yo stickahs! RAOE - I noticed that on your E you only put a little bit of drop shadow on the left side, but it should go on the whole bottom part of it like in your other letters. JAZE - those are all awesome I cant really crit them. REVID - how much for that canvas? Its pretty dope Hazmat - I like that a lot should look good colored. Test - bookend it with your T's SEIZE - I feel like the I needs something more but it looks really good. ATE - awesome throwup. I like the T a ton. Heres a simple that I ruined when I colored it. Crits on the letters?
make your bars a consistent width and loose that pointy bit off the e and work on your shadow a bit more
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try making ur shit cymetrical, sorry for the wack ass diagram [Broken External Image]:http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/3024/100akerwood0031mx9.jpg
um, u gotta give crits if u expect to get any, pluss i went to the trobul of saving ur stuff on paint, editing it then reposting it- u dont just have to ignore me like i never posted and ask for crits on the same pic right below me, not to bitch out on u
No , aha its a good suggestion my computer is just terrible and doesn't load up the pages to great . I deleted that extra post , Funerals - not bad , take out the bubble in your E and make your lines as best parrallel as possible . EaseOne - work on keeping your bars the same size and ease off on the characters for a while .
Seek go to the new to graffiti thread, lose all the extensions and go simple. Jayes, write darker i cant see what it says too well.
can you read it? (its morbid on the left, random crap in serbian on the right) seek - the letter structure sucks balls simples
The style is what i love about your graffiti,its distinctive and bold, the left is hard to read but the right... spec'a de rodendan?