STEYER- fix tha "E" nd lose the bottom extension on tha "Y"
TECHKANUCK - fix ur letter style
EVASION - not feelin tha "S"
HAZE - thaz clean
TASTY - there both hella clean, jus on tha top one, id fix tha triangle part u got goin 4 the top part of the "S"
GLYCE - keep workin, especially on ur "K"
SILENT - we both kno u kan do better
MOSE - wow work on ur letters a lot more, tha "S" and "E" r horrible, nd they don't evn fit the style

 

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dope throw@ mose the drips are tight.... heres somethin nothin special though yea i wanna do simples but i like to test shit out now and then....

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yea, its good u like to experiment but yea, go simpler!

 

Im sure its just a similarty and NOT a bite.

K F C!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

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haha WORD!

 

I dont got shit to say no one else has said
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crits?

 

what should i do with my E?

 

make it look more like an E is my advice

 

yo everyone has already told you this....
you need to lose all your extensions and extra shit

go back to simpler shit because its not working out for the past few sketches

 

Steyr- Evasion- Haz-e---- You're all on the right track. Keep it up.

Steyr- that last outline had a cold lock on the overall flow and some of the detailwork shows that you're really understanding what you observe. You need to focus on letter structure now to take it to the next level. if you look at each letter singularly, they aren't bad, but they aren't remarkable either. You should be able to look at each letter and enjoy them as a standalone, ya know? I'm looking foreward to seeing more in the future.

Taste- Breaking it down a bit huh? Going simple? It looks pretty good, just don't ever simplify your handys. I'm still a huge fan of them.

 

yeah steyr do uppercase

EVAD - The colors do not fit that piece in anyway haha. They are like balloon colors. Your character came out a little fat too but other than that its a nice solid drawing.

 

iight you guys, i post some of my simples. but they kinda suck. i gotta get new batteries for camera first.

 

thats pretty dope.
the letters are all nice. accept the yellow one. what letter is that, a C?

 

i know they dont fit the girl i was with said it looked scary so i made dare i say "happy" colors for herand the characs supposed to be chunky cuz he's me

 

shut the fuck up, dick head.

two of the letters dont fit the style? there is only four letters...youre an idiot.

 

I dont think mose's critisism was very helpful or valid at all but dont overreact and cause a fight please.

 

mose- dont hate on kase.

 

Simples!!